Yeahh it's acquired taste I suppose not many are interested in this style of writing it's too complex it's reminds me of English classes but it's just my problem I don't know if others like it or not and I can't say that you have made many mistakes you are pretty good at it to but don't drag it too much when it can be described or explained in shot terms

Overly complex it's becoming a chore to read like I feel there is not need to use overly complicated words or an entire paragraph to describe anything in the novel you could have done it using common terms it's like reading a science textbook with numerous words which is beyond our comprehension. Overall story is interesting but overall hard to read like you are writing on purpose to make more difficult to understand

I think he should atleast learn to fight

Yeahh it's okay as I said story was interesting you could try to write a new one or this one again more realistic I would like to read that keep writing and improving no hate man just pointing it out how others have not mentioned it

And how can this be guaranteed as a birthday gift he hold no more power than before and name is nothing more than a title

Didn't the gods just gave him some boons and help I don't think they did it out of kindness atleast not god of light and I don't think they would be forgiving when you try to steal their followers and faith

What reference and where is it just curious

Okay story isss good to read but it's just idiotic I mean why would Starks believe him to be a god when he could not even protect them and give him all the powers I mean they are not a common people whose only woes are about getting food and surviving tommoro they are nobles for fuvksake they are called kings of the north they would not allow him to basically rule calling himself as guardian of Starks and telling them about their death and then accepting is huge brainfuvk even ned would lose his hounor to keep his daughters safe

Okay grammer is becoming worse

It is similar to another novel even in that mc was same like an edgelord

Yeahh and did he not get everything belonging to Dracula even his memories and experience then why does he have to train like is going to train in something new

What is the book he got

Tell the name dammit if you want to suggest something

Okay soo did enri got horn from ainz if so then mc supporting her can be justified if then she is no different from ordinary villagers mc protecting and supporting is waste of his time

Okay first of all this novel is getting confusing I mean did Clementine survive here and captured as prisoner if so then don't ainz know that she confronted with a knight and a magi who faught her and left her to her devices did he not see the black scripture die by his own hand and disappear

Pls don't make him betray nazarik the whole part of charm of overlord is nazarik and it's inhabitants he betraying and moving away from them doesn't make me sit right just a suggestion

Okay sooo finally I got it why the goddess sent another girl to him to help because MC is not a smartass from modern world noo he is stupid then a otaku he acts as a soldier than a emperor now he literally going to meet with every house or people to become his vassals it's like he is selling his empire door to door why does he had to run beyond the wall when there is a army coming for head of boys you saved by sacrificing your soldiers you could have waited till you finished them or you could have burned them first and go on to your business

Idk why you think that westros has better soldiers than essos you do knw that there is something called disputed land where war is common every year and all the free city hire mercenary who fight every year compared to westros expect for knights who are not in large numbers most of the army are conscripts who are taken from frams

But didn't the synopsis say about him being smart ass or something

Yeahh I mean they are using a common ship which has no stealth function so how can he can leave and enter a planet with out anyone noticing