Shiro_TheWiseOne
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Shiro_TheWiseOne11mthCommentedI really hope author will not focus too much on his Past Life. My greatest problem with Reincarnation Fanfictions with OldMCs is this, how the story starts becoming less Present and more of a series of Flashbacks. The stuff with the Dragon & Phoenix was already enough.
'But if I wasn't a Sword Cultivator, I definitely would've encountered a few Heart Demons before reaching the Open Heaven Realm.' Su Mu thought.- Shiro_TheWiseOne1yrCommented
I don't even remember them...
Servants or not? - Shiro_TheWiseOne1yrReplied to Pastlives
True... If the fight in CN don't have 3 chapters of reaction and disbelief, 2 chapters of fighting and then more 1 of reaction then it isn't a fight...
"You came here intending to court my woman, but from the looks of it, you never thought about the consequences of your actions." Su Mu looked at Bai Yun Feng as the smile on his face disappeared, and soon, a hazy blue glow appeared around his sword. - Shiro_TheWiseOne1yrReplied to Roxysmo_Forever
To be honest if Pastlives did this then it's a miracle...
But yeah, covered it in one and a half chapters, going forward with the plot from tomorrow. - Shiro_TheWiseOne1yrCommented
Why extend so much? Just kill them and go.
"You came here intending to court my woman, but from the looks of it, you never thought about the consequences of your actions." Su Mu looked at Bai Yun Feng as the smile on his face disappeared, and soon, a hazy blue glow appeared around his sword. - Shiro_TheWiseOne1yrCommented
Probably the worst chapter in the entire fanfiction. Just feels completely useless, nothing happened, nothing advanced, nothing important. Anyone interested can just jump this chapter to the next and nothing will change in the story. Meh, a disappointment after waiting so long just to read this.
Alright, this scene is ending next chapter, planned on doing it in this one, but eh. - Shiro_TheWiseOne1yrCommented
Eidolon: Let me help you with this problem.
"More than a little..." Saeko chuckles. "Eidolon, there's something I need to do. Can I go back first?" She asks him in a low voice - Shiro_TheWiseOne1yrCommented
I mean... She did almost nothing and wants the Sword and he owing one? Is she brain dead?
Eidolon looks at her "Sorry, Belasco's sword was lost during the Explosion..." He lies easily. - Shiro_TheWiseOne1yrCommented
And here she lost all her IQ. Put the Sword in her neck and ask to repeat. We need Cultivator Templates to deal with this Young Master LVL IQ.
"You owe me one, my dear." She says to him - Shiro_TheWiseOne1yrCommented
To be honest. This is getting so cliche that is irritating... Nothing really interesting beyond some dialogues with X-Men happened in this Arc. Illyana is just in the end a side character that most don't even know, but all this Arc for her. Not to mention the whole "Villain Escapes" and "Artifact Sealed" that feels super cliche...
That sword is something that he doesn't feel comfortable taking back to his world, even inside the Sky Poison Pearl. He will use the energy of the Promethium to hide the adamantium containers. - Shiro_TheWiseOne1yrCommented
Seriously... This is already becoming outrageous, every chapter has almost half or more of it's word count in Monologues, Explanations and Philosophy.
Adamantium is durable. Simple as that. Nigh indestructible, and its molecular integrity is as such that it can be forged in a pico proportion, and become the sharpest blade in the world. Cutting between molecules. - Shiro_TheWiseOne1yrCommented
Just kill them.
But then again, I might end it in a few paragraphs as I did with Yang Kai's death, and even if I don't, it won't exceed a chapter. - Shiro_TheWiseOne1yrCommented
To be honest... She is hotter with the veil.
Her face wasn't covered with her characteristic veil, and feeling Su Mu's gentle hug, her face turned red as she was barely able to hold back her tears. - Shiro_TheWiseOne1yrCommented
Just me that thinks that she feels like a NPC in a Game?
"Please rest well, Young Hero." Madame Jiang bowed once before leaving the room. - Shiro_TheWiseOne1yrReplied to SovereignLux
That's the thing... He IS a Teen. I don't mean he needs to get super angry or anything. But he is always planning, fighting, training, researching or something. I just wanna some chapters of relaxation. For fucks sake, what's the meaning of so many "Waifus" if he don't touch them? More than 300k words since last chapter related I think. Just let MC go fuck Felicia, Shego, Jean and Saeko and then go back to normal routine.
Whatever, don't care. I will be civil at least. - Shiro_TheWiseOne1yrReplied to Lunarian_King
Erase the limits of his erase powers
He has a list of powers to upgrade, like [New Order] or even [Erasure], the power that he is keeping a secret to use against Apocalypse and make the eventual confrontation last 1 second. - Shiro_TheWiseOne1yrCommented
Time to give him a Cultivator Template. They can sit and do nothing for billions of years.
"Second, If this spell is stronger than what I think, I will change my plan from distracting Belasco, to defeating him. I will go through his research or whatever. I and Illyana will stay here in Limbo for months or even years if necessary to break the spell. You guys return before us." He says like is no big deal. - Shiro_TheWiseOne1yrCommented
Aren't you Brazilian? Use the power of Portugueses when finding Gold and Trees in Brazil. Plunder (MAX).
Hmm~ My American side is getting antsy seeing all these resources sitting here. Maybe I should bring "freedom" to this dimension and "liberate" these guys from this... - Shiro_TheWiseOne1yrCommented
Meh. I can see why. But don't mean I like it. Recently the Main Character seems to be too 'Civil'. He is like Professor X trying to appease Humans. It feels too much. It's getting harder and harder to like the Main Character when he is becoming "Inhuman" in Emotional Response.
Whatever, don't care. I will be civil at least. - Shiro_TheWiseOne1yrCommented
agreeing with the two guys
She also offered me a gift as thanks for helping her back then. I wasn't expecting to receive a high-end air bike. But then, it seemed fitting given her family's business.