The story's start and synopsis is amazing although it has some mistakes like tomorrow is written in place of moving and can instead of can't. This might be a dictionary fault. But I would love to read more.

Amazing story. The most unique thing about this story is that it is written by a Pakistani and written in Pakistani style. Good luck author in writing more novels in future

Amazing story Everyone should read this story. I have read it several times Love this story [img=update][img=update] start writing chapters more quickly Write more