"Ah, and gimme your stones. That's important" Камень я не дам...

I really, really hope you meant Helium.

You know, this is the first chat group fanfic I've really enjoyed, and one of the best fanfics I've ever read overall.

Читал главу, удивлялся знакомым, но несвойственным для английского оборотам, и всё думал, где же я это видел... И вспомнил вдруг одну гадину, что обломала шикарный пейринг с Гермионой.

Okay, I'm ready to accept the Light. Fanfic is fanfic, and even such nonsense as introducing new natural transformations into the story is quite acceptable. But what was that just now magic outside of Hogwarts? Seriously, the dude just strongly wished for his chakra to become green, and it effortlessly changed its color like that? Harry, log off.

I don't like being a killjoy, but how should it be written in Japanese? I'm amazed at the Naruto ficwriters who start incorporating English into the names of their original clans. Eizen. Okay, at least that can be properly written in Katakana, so thanks for that. But the problem is that all the clans listed in this chapter have Japanese roots, and this "Eizen" just doesn't fit in here. Uzumaki - spiral, Yuki - snow, Eizen - ???. And the thing is, you don't need to have a higher education, know the Japanese language, or consult with a native speaker to come up with a proper name. Just Google how "crystal" is written in Japanese. Shuu. There you have the clan name. Not difficult, right?

It was the dumbest way to limit a main character I've ever read about.