it's a fine story overall, even much better than some new story that has been released. this story doesn't deserve a one-star rating at all, if it doesn't suit your taste then you should just go ahead and get lost. i just hope it won't take long to update or i'd just discard this story too along with the others

the story is good, everything about it is good, but is this a premium book or something? i need to literally purchase this before I can continue to read it