Very disappointed! The book needs better proofing and is moving too slow and is quite boring at this point. One chapter released very 12 hours? Should have a rule not to post a book until it is completed.

Needs a better proof reader!

The author keeps mixing up names. Says Ellis when it should be James, etc.

Bought lots of chapters…now I have to wait for updates??? 😡😡😡

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Said there will be another chapter in 45 minutes this morning. I waited and then it changed to 11 hours 52 minutes!!! Don’t lie like the characters in the book, just don’t post a book until it is completed!

I honestly do not think these books should be posted unless they are completed! I think the author is figuring out as they go and does not even know who kidnapped Jodie South! Getting ridiculous!

Why no update this morning after saying new chapter in 20 minutes now it says 11 hours…? What is wrong with this author/app?

Good story but do not like this app!

Very frustrating! One chapter at a time? Please wrap this up or give us a chance to read at least 5 chapters a day. You make money.

Great storyline! I am on pins and needles waiting for next chapter update!!!