bad bad bad bad don't like it it's interesting but the way it was written is boring

more!!!! I'm obsessed with this fanfic especially the relationship of the mc and bubble gum

nevermind don't like it anymore

don't like it anymore especially putting some other reincarnated person just for fixing the plot holes

kekeke it's good though it is a little too fast for me but at least it made me quite entertained and hopeful that the next chapters to come would be as great if not greater than the previous one

not debatable

because this is a good read I'll give it a power stone everyday of course if it updates everyday

it's seriously good and it's just the fifth chapter I'm excited about what will happen in later chapters

I know that it still has 3 chapters but that doesn't change the fact that it's good and has the potential to be the best fanfic of avatar as of now

always making the same mistake bruv like how??

personally I don't like it there's only 1 chapter of the story everything else is trash (I know I'm just hating it but I am)

it has potential but what particular thing I don't like is sometimes the chapters are short so I guess that's all I can say for now...

give us more chapters more more more!!!!!

noice I forgot about some of the events in the story so rereading it again with improve quality (hopefully ) is a nice way to experience the story again 😁

it's ending is bad......................

yes it won't be a problem to read this again with some twiks

yes

and it's full of plot holes how did a satan class demon couldn't sense a three children who doesn't even know how to hide there presence if she did sense why didn't she arrive before they got attack

if rias family doesn't want the marriage on rias either, so why did they agree to the marriage ? don't tell me they just agreed because of the pressure, the Gremory family ain't that weak that kind of pressure wouldn't affect them that much

im rooting for you, because usually other author tend to ignore the advice of some reader you listened though. I hope you would improve in your writing style after or during this as you write😁😁