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Basically, how to build a good story, not too complicated, suitable for those who want to read for entertainment. But if it's about expertise, each person will have a different assessment. Good, there is potential for further development, so I hope the author improves more
I think you should develop MC relationships with female or male main characters instead of fighting scenes if doing so would make the story pacing better than fighting that doesn't make any sense at all (personal opinion)