Ngl i Also do feel likw this rewrite is going to be better, theres already so much more lore i see much more potential

The updating stability isnt the worst beacuse there is a new chapter everyday beside hollidays, The world backround isnt the worst but i dont know to much beside the forest and the shops, Writing quality once and awhile i find some lazy writing but beside that its fine, Story development the potionoligy is a good idea for development and the town quest was fun to read, Character design i like the cool dot the grows in his eyes from somthing and the cool white hair but beside that a normal character.

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