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S_M_99871yrCommentedSo, Grayson is a woman now?!
Grayson is a gentle, virtuous, quiet and cool woman to her mother.- S_M_99871yrCommented
Shouldn't it be ARIA not Riley whose hand couldn't help stretching out HER hand?!
Riley's hand couldn't help stretching out his hand to touch the dark blue outer package and slowly opened it with some trembling. - S_M_99871yrCommented
Shouldn't it be JAYDEN who smiled sweetly?!
Aria smiled sweetly, got on the bus and said goodbye to his mother and father. - S_M_99871yrCommented
What????? What does this even trying to say?
"That... that... is just an accident! Who knows that after so many years, you are still so divine in drinking. It is simply Altman's fight against the little monster Yi Yang Niubi!" Riley felt that his head was still a little drowsy now. - S_M_99871yrCommented
Who is Aaron?
However, without Aaron family's power, she did not dare to do it easily. - S_M_99871yrCommented
Hmmm....to make sense. how about trying, "Of course, but do you mind if YOU go as my assistant?" Proofreading, editing, and a plethora of other skills would allow ALL these chapters to make more sense!
"Of course, but do you mind if I go as my assistant?" - S_M_99871yrCommented
How about trying "I'll hang up if YOU don't talk."
"I'll hang up if I don't talk." - S_M_99871yrCommented
Since when did Riley arrive on the scene to say anything?
Layla took it and looked at it for a long time before Riley said, "Jayden, you did a good job. Mom supports you. Since you have children, you should confess to Grayson earlier. It is best to go now. Don't you still have the key to the villa of Jinxiu Tiandu? Go there, then give him a surprise, have a romantic and warm candlelight dinner, and then choose a suitable time to tell him that you are pregnant with his child. I think he will be touched! " - S_M_99871yrCommented
Why would Aria raise her own voice to hear herself?!
Aria deliberately raised Aaron family's housewife a little louder so that Aria could hear her clearly. - S_M_99871yrCommented
Again, who's Aaron?
"Dad, you have a good rest. When your daughter and I become a legitimate Aaron family housewife, you and your mother will not have to suffer so much." - S_M_99871yrCommented
Again, anthomaniacis wrong word choice. It means having a fondness of flowers.
"Natalie, brain is into the water, you don't know because of your anthomaniac, how many men cheated you? Every time I wipe your ass, why don't you have a long memory? How many times do you have to be cheated before you can fucking wake up?" - S_M_99871yrCommented
I don't think anthomaniac is an appropriate word choice.
"Natalie, can you stop being so anthomaniac? You don't know it's very annoying and depressed for me to clean up your mess every day?" Lan is really unable to spit out her best friend. - S_M_99871yrCommented
Who is Grace?!
Grace pretended to be drunk. - S_M_99871yrCommented
Shouldn't Aria be a clever WOMAN?!
Aria is a clever man. She knows very well what is floating in lsaac's eyes. Aria turned around and faced the sea with a soft voice. "Lsaac, this sea, is really beautiful. It meets the sky and is closest to the sky, but... it can never be hugged. Because, as long as they hug, the world will be destroyed." - S_M_99871yrCommented
Again shouldn't this be Riley?!
Aria took Caleb and slowly walked into the elevator. - S_M_99871yrCommented
Should this be Riley being as Aria is missing?!
Grayson dragged Aria into his office. - S_M_99871yrCommented
Now, we have someone else?!
Cheng Hai also knew that he had forced his son too tightly and forced him to be anxious. He was fleeing the home, but after so many years, they had been reviewing the incident of that year. - S_M_99871yrCommented
Who and who?!
Lily, with a kind face and a slight bow, "Mr. Hui, Master Bai sent you back last night, and Master Bai left after sending you back." - S_M_99871yrCommentedCh 140 Chapter one hundred and forty you don't think too much