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You could be right but I felt a prequel at the start of the story wouldn’t have made much sense and I wanted to introduce how different members of house dredd fought before Renn forged his armour
I don’t know about him being quite on the planet killing level, but he’s definitely going to be one of the strongest in the galaxy at his peak. He’s also going to be at least skilled at most forms of combat but won’t be on the master level unless he’s specialised in it.
HK-47 is a fantastic character, but I feel like I wouldn’t be able to do him justice with my writing abilities so probably won’t include him. Mainly cause I didn’t do well enough in my English gcse to know what word I would need to put at the start of any sentence he speaks that would describe the sentence
Thanks for the suggestions, they’re good ideas but I’ve already got a plan for the direction I’m taking the story so they might not be feasible. I don’t what to give away too much of the plot but, I think I mentioned the equipment and armour abilities Renn has in the chapter were he forged his armour but I’ll create an auxiliary chapter for it if I get time. I’ll be going over Renn’s military and other resources in an upcoming chapter. Renn will be with other girls as well, but not too many more. I don’t want to give to much away but at least one has already been introduced in the story. There will be chapters on starfighters in the future but most won’t have Renn in the pilots seat. Thanks for reading.
Thanks, that should be fixed now
I’m thinking of giving him a lightsabre at some point in the future, but that’s not a definite thing and if it is it won’t be for a while. And at the moment he’s mainly focusing on sensory force abilities, just because I don’t think he would benefit from focusing on more of them.
Thanks I’ll fix that
Cheers 👍, I’ll fix that