Shiny goddoof

I like the fic, but i am super confused at the moment with the interactions between Jacket and Suit… like, they are both Hifumi, but Suit is written in a way where the connection between the two seems like they are not? Im very interested in them meeting again so i can get some sort of recollection - i kinda think i missed how he divvied himself up… So far the fic is great and i like the characters you introduce.. Especially since you use very unusual animes in the way that they are often overlooked or rarely used by other writers! I cant really criticise the current arc since i havent really watched the anime, so apart from you resummarising the connection/division of mc (Hes disguised as Suit? But im not sure?) i can really only suggest that you write about the devils side more to get pespective on both sides. Good job on the fic so far tho mate.

I think it's both absolutely hilarious and interesting. The fic is so good that i even have a hard time believing it's your first time writing - you're an absolute madlad with an absolute talent for writing with humour! You even hit it right on the nail balancing the exploration of magic/info with action/conversations and story progress.

I really love the concept and ideas you are using for the fic. You rarely find fics as good/interesting as this one so it would be a shame if you ended it - However, you trying to force yourself into writing would reflect itself into the story. Being passionate about your ideas is what makes the story captivating! Id say you could give it a longer break or look at new directions the story could move towards, that you might find more interesting writing about. Either way cheers for the good work so far!

Aside from some sort of bootleg W40K dakka powers he really gives me the vibe of malkavians from vampires the masquerade... i find it hilarious because those powers pretty much scream ripoff vampire in the face of the actual vampires hahaha