Don't mind me, just giving my book a 5-star review since I've seen other people do it. HAHAHAHA

It's not showing up on my profile rn because it's currently being vetted. Just search up the title and sort by update. It should show up then, reader

I am indeed basing this off of her, reader. Nice catch

Thank you for the review. I'll be honest and say I was a bit frustrated reading this. I've been having trouble sleeping so I'm not in the best mood to receive criticism, but I really like writing and want to improve.Can you talk me through how you would go about improving my story? The most common critique of my stories are the mcs. Any advice would be appreciated.Lastly, thanks for not insulting me. Its really hard for me to be constantly called names without it going to my head. So I really appreciated that you were amicable, even if you didn't like my story.

Nah, not forgotten. Saving her for the war game arc with the apollo familia

Niddhog is a separate dragon iirc. Nidhogg was a dragon taken down by seven great spirits in the past using a divine ritual.Then there's the one eyed black dragon who is of the same species but separate and much stronger.Then there's the nidhogg made by Enyo which is of the same species but significantly younger and less strong

Nah, Eina's father is alive and well. He was mentioned to be taking care of her mother

Hitogami didn't know about rudeus because he wasn't important until the first turning point event.Also, hitogami is capable of reading Rudeus' future, such as when he told Rudy about what would've happened if he didn't save Roxy and instead talked to the two beastgirls at the magic academy.

It means that all traces of Paul are completely immune from being seen by the human god.Meaning he wont have to worry about the human god meddling with him to hinder his growth

Paul will not become a selfless hero. He'll only intervene when he's capable of doing something without detrimenting himself.This might change depending on how the story goes, but that's the way im planning on writing him right now.

I believe that event was during his 5th birthday, reader. So he was much younger

Yes, Pilemon Notos Greyrat, the father of Luke Motos Greyrat

I believe that only applies to people whose bodies aren't originally a part of the human world.Rudeus was able to have his future read by the human god because his body is originally from that world, only his soul is different.The only characters who would be immune to the human gods vision would be Orsted who came from the dragon world, and Nanahoshi who came from Earth.

Well its known how Hitogami is defeated. All that is known as that he foresaw a future where he lays defeated by Orsted, the future transmigration, and Rudy's descendants

would you mind rewording your question, reader?

Are you talking about Argonaut or Albert? Because for both they borrowed the powers of spirits. Jupiter helped Argo, and Aria helped Albert

I apologize reader HAHAHA

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