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UncleBao

UncleBao

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    Really can't figure out how such a promising plot can be screwed up so badly... I was so excited in the beginning when his cheat was revealed, and thought, worst case, it'll be a standard xianxia plot. Never could I imagine that the MC would be characterized so badly. Playing around with lolis, random fights that seem like they've been written on a whim, unnecessary conflicts because MC acts like it's beneath him to explain circumstances properly. Especially chapters 365-370, why couldn't he just show the dean how he modifies a technique by requesting one that's not in the library and doing it on the spot. Instead, the author just had to escalate this to another meaningless conflict. Sincerely request the author to improve the novel while they can. Try and take reference from the ones that succeeded with similar cheats (Warlock of the Magus World kind of novels). Just a suggestion from my part.

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