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Story is great, you can tell the author baisically merged a bunch of great novels into 1 storyline. However, the authors writing is terrible. Shamelessly uses lines in said novels verbatim. Completely forgets things written in 1 chapter to only go against it later. MC will be op 1 second.. the next massively under powered. Its like D&D from GoT wrote this. MC will earn 1 skill only to learn it again later as the author forgot about it. MC will have 1000+ skills but only uses the same 3 over and over. If it weren't for the overall plot, this would be terrible. That said, the first dozen chapters are great. Loved them. as time goes on .. it just gets worse and worse. ends up being 50% talking about cooking, 20% flirting/sex, 10% side stories, 10% battles that make 0 sense , and 10% actually good plot writing. It needs a serious editor/rewrite and then it could be great.
- DaoistWpynas1yrCommented
pretty sure i remember mc gettint confusion immunity . o well
I wanted to try out her power and told her to go all out on me. She replied with a "Gehehe, alright big sis" as she called a powerful mist that began to confuse my mind and sanity tremendously. Even being able to penetrate most of my resistances and my immunity partially. I had to use my Illusion Magic to counter her powerful attack. - DaoistWpynas1yrReplied to AzuritePaladin
i just scroll past these dumb fight scenes at timea. this far in you have to be used to the author just ignoring her skills in an attempt to make her less op at times.. like given she has like 1000 skills and the past 3 big battles she really only used the dumb cursed claw attack.... over and over...
Lastly was Ganjo, the powerful Giant Alligator Lizardman, who was as big as Nesiphae and a had towering muscular body with powerful rocky skin. Because of Ganjo raw power, I had to activate one of my armors to be able to live his hits. - DaoistWpynas1yrReplied to twidilynob
by now you should know nothing makes sense with skills and this author. good story, but tons of holes and non sense. i mean after like 1000 skills and titles.. i dont really blame the author for forgetting a bunch or just ignoring them.
However, the fun didn't last long as, after one hour of intense fighting, Kaguya ran out of MP and became too frail to continue. This was her only downside, but she managed to keep up with me for an hour, which is already incredible. - DaoistWpynas1yrCommented
or eaten it and the previous pin. nevermind that initial title mc got that was supposed to increase luck with every level..
I don't know what's wrong with these boxes, but I kept getting these weird items. This keychain gave me +30 MP and a small increase in MP regeneration. I ended up using it as I could attach it inside my armor so one could look at it. - DaoistWpynas1yrReplied to Bananapants
it's ok, author is quite good at ignoring her stats/skills when plot demands it lol
*[Unique Skill] Passive. Grants Kireina fangs that are able to devour even the hardest of diamonds alongside a void-like belly which can store an infinite amount of food. This skill comes with the abnormal status effect [Insatiable Appetite]. Kireina must eat at least five times her size in food every 20 hours, or she will go on a rampage and eat whatever is in front of her... - DaoistWpynas1yrCommented
not sure why the author even included limb regeneration skills when they are just forgotten about 100% of the time
However, they lost limbs weren't regenerated. - DaoistWpynas1yrCommented
mc has like 1000 skills.. but seems to only use 1 attack now
The Lich continued shooting more lighting spears at my Cursed Claws, making them detonate prematurely. However, I reluctantly kept sending more and more. Thanks to my resent skill fusion, my Cursed Claws have evolved to a next level, becoming completely solid and giving me the ability to summon more than 21. - DaoistWpynas1yrReplied to Sluggard246
shocked author can keep these like 100+ names straight but not logical things like undead casting holy/light... lol
Although Kizuato haven't figured his own Combat System yet, I could already see some insights. - DaoistWpynas1yrReplied to Ayden12g
author forgets alot.. just made her transform to soul vamp... then forgets lol
I quickly slashed all the thugs into pieces in mere seconds with just one Cursed Claw, making blood and meat rain everywhere. Using this opportunity, I quickly absorbed all the nutritious and fresh blood in one big sip. - DaoistWpynas1yrReplied to TheNewRS_GT
she has like 18 limb regen skills.. one was even something like instant crab leg regen. i just ignore logic with the author lol. too many skills for even the author to remember lol
I woke up early on the morning, I noticed several changes in my body, and my lost leg had been completely regenerated after evolving, which were wonderful news. I was greeted by Zehe who was at my side, she was moving her head while sleeping, and sometimes talking, as if she was having a very vivid dream. - DaoistWpynas1yrReplied to MorrowsBrand
so many skills either the author forgets or conviently ignores them to not make the mc even more op.
Before entering this big lake, Belle quickly casted a water spell, creating small bubbles around our heads, which helped us on breathing below water. However, this was not necessary at all because we already got underwater breathing skills from the merman corpses from before, but we decided to not say anything.