Brazil here!!! I'm loving this story so much you can see that the author is learning and maturing with each chapter. Can improve? He can. But I love to follow this evolution. If I can make a suggestion, I would like to see more care in explaining the evolutions, without rushing. I would also like to see Kevin's mother marry Solomon and have a child. What would Kevin's reaction be to having a brother, before he had kids of his own. I would like another world to appear before the final conflict, which enters into dispute to dominate Kevin's planet, and he wants to defend his new home. Before going into the Titans arc, or the Titans arc taking a break, to introduce that development, I would love to see that as well. Anyway, congratulations on the work, it's very nice to read. And it would be cool if some fujoshi like me made arts to illustrate the characters too. hahahahah I love this BL story so much.

I love the story, I need to know how it goes. Please dont give up, at least 1 or 2 chapters a week. I love the story, I need to know how it goes

Please comeback. at least 1 or 2 chapters a week. I love the story, I need to know how it goes

Hey! Please revert back to the "system" of overcoming the karmic "SYSTEM". It doesn't make sense for Daniel to lose the system, just as it's horrible for him to leave his feelings for his family. So far this is what has kept us hopeful. Don't kill this story, find a way to get back to the best of everything. For the love of God. I discovered this one a short time ago and got addicted, to almost die of heart when I found out that he not only lost the system, but also the cultivation and feeling for family and friends. NOOOOOOOO !Big NO! For the love of God

Excelent one! We NEED you comeback write "WDS" continuation, Rise of GODKind need comeback. Daneel needs meet their wifes and friends. Eloise and Xuan, Elanev and Faxul, as fast as he can. Please. We all need that. And the the explanation about power levels (warrior, champion and hero) is still confusing to me. I still can't quite understand what stage he is currently in. Please. come back soon. I know you've been through a lot of trouble and maybe you still are, but take a deep breath and turn around. If you need help with ideas, or some writing, you can call us. I'm here and I can help for the sake of this wonderful work. [img=recomendar]

Excelent one! We NEED you comeback write "WDS" continuation, Rise of GODKind need comeback. Daneel needs meet their wifes and friends. Eloise and Xuan, Elanev and Faxul, as fast as he can. Please. We all need that. And the the explanation about power levels (warrior, champion and hero) is still confusing to me. I still can't quite understand what stage he is currently in. Please. come back soon. I know you've been through a lot of trouble and maybe you still are, but take a deep breath and turn around. If you need help with ideas, or some writing, you can call us. I'm here and I can help for the sake of this wonderful work. [img=recomendar]