"The story is very amateurish". This is Webnovel where most writers are amateurs

Idk what chapter you've read up to since you've posted this comment 9 months ago, but... - I'll admit that he does win most fights and very rarely loses, but he does lose. Calling him flawless is a way overstatement. - "Making any women fall in love with him" is completely false because it starts out with him looking average at best and doesn't become handsome in the later chapters. Before he becomes handsome and make any women fall in love with him, they want him because he's strong and can protect them which is understandable seeing his strength. - "Btw a personality that he acquired with some skill because the author was too lazy to develop and simply created a skill for all the abrupt change". I think you haven't really read the story. The skill you're talking about 'Stone Heart'. He received that skill because of his past trauma and it only affects his currently personality. Later that changes and I think it's pretty well done. His personaliity was always serious after his tramua and rarely trust people, this skill just multiplies it. I'm not saying this story is the best in the world, but I think it's really good. Again, I don't know what chapter you read up to, but if you kept up-to-date with the current chapters, things will explain themselves.

Thank the lord. I really enjoyed the beginning chapters, but I was a little scared of that. I'm really excited to read now!

I just have a quick question... I've read a little bit and I don't want to drop the story if I was misunderstanding something... I want to know if all the MC does is fight with his sheep. I'm not really a big fan of stories where the MC let the party fight while the MC just sits on his butt. I've read some of the comments about dark magic and whatnot. So does he actually fight by using magic and/or swords himself? Or is he mainly a stagiest for his party?

This is the first novel I've read and it was Magnificent. What I'm about to write may sound cringy but I just felt like I have to post it whether it be on a review or something else. You're more than welcomed to skip what I say and read the review. Before I get into anything, I would just like to say something. Before I decided to start reading novels, I would mainly read Manga, Manhwa and Manhuas. Before reading those, I've watched Anime which I haven't heard about since late 2019 to early 2020. None of my friends nor family watched or read anime or manga so I had no clue what I was missing out. Before then I would be pretty much bored with my life that was consumed with video games and school, which would repeat over and over again for numerous days, months and years. I've never even cared enough to read as I thought it was all plain and boring. After watching a lot to Anime, I decided to read my first Manhwa which was 'Solo-Leveling'. That alone made me realize a whole new world of entertainment was out there, making me realize how foolish my thoughts and opinions were about reading. As I continue to read non-stop manga, manhwa and manhua I became obsessed with it. I loved reading so much that I wanted to write my own story, but I had no experience in writing so I wanted to read a few novels to familiarize myself on how I should go about doing it (I don't plan on using anyone's writing styles or content, I just wanted to see how they write and how I should practice in the near future) which led me a few days ago when I tried to read my first novel, Cultivation Online. Now then, I just want to say I much I love this novel. Throughout the entire story my body was fuming with excitement, beginning to when I caught up with the story (chapter 1041). The characters felt real, the world building was phenomenal, the writing quality was superb and easy to read. It felt like I can picture everything that was happening as I was reading. Throughout the story I teared up, laughed, got angry, excitement built up within me. I couldn't really asked for a better first novel to read. I'm at a loss on what to continue to write, because everything was perfect for me. Along the way, there were a few mix ups with spelling and other things, but I honestly didn't really care because I could just keep reading and forget about it. Just after catching up, I can't wait for more chapters and to read other novels. Thanks for reading my review. I know it was either cringy or corny but I really had a blast reading this. I was also having fun writing this review retailing all the things that happened within the story. I just want to say that I hope everything continues as they are.