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RedFact4mthReplied to youneedsomemilk- RedFact4mthCommentedCh 32 Blood Frenzy
- RedFact4mthPosted
Author here! Just wanted to say hi, took me quite some time to actually know how to review my own Book. Also, this story is just made for fun and some of the characters actually are my friend, even the main character is.Also, I'M putting all of my efforts into making sure this will become a great story. I'll also take any kind of criticism in order to improve later chapters and update the current chapters to be better.
This book has been deleted. - RedFact4mthCommentedCh 31 Am I going to die?
- RedFact4mthReplied to Error4004Ch 30 Saintess - make this world full of love
- RedFact4mthCommentedCh 30 Saintess - make this world full of love
- RedFact4mthReplied to GoddessAlbedo
AN ORPHAN WITH NO MOTHER AND FATHER LIVING IN THE STREETS!!!
PAYWALLLLL!!!! - RedFact4mthCommented
Best I can do it $1.0 In my country's money...
*** Ready! The pay wall is comingggg!!!! (* ￣ ▽ ￣) b - RedFact4mthCommented
Amigo, por favor, I'm gonna cry 😢I thought this was gonna be a free novel...
*** The pay wall is coming!!! (⁀ᗢ⁀) - RedFact4mthCommented
I'm broke, please no...
*** Are you ready for the pay wall ╰ (▔∀▔) ╯ ?? - RedFact6mthReplied to MF_THE_BOTH
Title Of The Chapters are: THIS STORY WILL BE EXCLUSIVE ect ect.Same thing for the content inside of it. He makes good stories, but overshadowed by his greed of money, he could become an actual author with his skills already but he chooses to monopolize off Patreon and use other accounts aswell.Though he probably continues the stories in his Patreon, it's not worth it.
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- RedFact8mthReplied to Braggski
Then what about choppers fruit? Pretty sure it's also called Human-Human Fruit.There most likely other Human-Human fruit out there aswell, just other variations like the mc has.
All conversation halted. A dozen eyes now scrutinized him, weighing the veracity of his claim. After what felt like hours, Luffy broke the silence with a grin, "You ate the Human-Human Fruit: Model Hanuman? That's amazing!" - RedFact8mthReplied to RedFact
nvm, this got nerfed aswell
It also gave me the knowledge of alchemical and medical lores with the ability to make potions to do practically anything. And by anything I mean literally anything. - RedFact8mthCommented
Then just make a potion that can make your body handle the powers you have thus making it so that you aren't nerfed meaning you'll be able to use your abilities to their full extent without waiting for a certain age/training to atchieve your full potential, a loop hooleee
It also gave me the knowledge of alchemical and medical lores with the ability to make potions to do practically anything. And by anything I mean literally anything. - RedFact8mthPosted
Writing Quality: 4 (4 Because its readable, and just a few mistakes) Story Development: 4 ( cant't say much about story development since there's only 11 chapters so far and mo fighting scenes aswell)Character Design: 5 (honestly, i just feel like its the right one cant't put my finger into it but hope its actually correct)Updating Stability: 3 (I dont't know if the author writes for fun when he's only bored but yeah, atleast not mass releasing with bad quality)World background: 4 (only the mha world so far and nothing mentioned about his old world)
- RedFact8mthReplied to iTride
It'll probably cost more to repair than to replace ngl
"Then they could die... I guess I'll never see her again." Nahida allowed the system to dissolve Shelly's body. Her body began to melt in front of Nahida's eyes. - RedFact8mthReplied to Astoria_Pendragon
yeah, a very bad combo ngl but hope nothing bad happens
Meanwhile, my mother works in a company. She goes to work during the day and comes home at night. My father, as the househusband, does the chores so that she won't have to worry about anything at home.