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Divinedaodream

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I’m a harem lover cuz I only end up liking side girl other than the main female lead. Also I hate yuri, I hate ntr, I hate long separations and hate when authors add filler chs,also hate dense/beta mc

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  • Divinedaodream
    Divinedaodream2mth
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    Also hope best for your health and you get better soon.

    Ch 36 Chapter 36: What is she thinking?
    I thought i could be happy
    Realistic · Ryukiro
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  • Divinedaodream
    Divinedaodream2mth
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    Very good ch, mc character is improving , but a slight reminder, like mc, other people characters are growing too, the only consideration that has to be kept is mc doesn’t lags behind others. For example if others try to make up for their mistakes or do something for mc, mc too should not lag behind in attaining emotional maturity unlike other romcom books where our mc stays dense and hesitant/fleeting throughout his character xd

    Ch 36 Chapter 36: What is she thinking?
    I thought i could be happy
    Realistic · Ryukiro
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  • Divinedaodream
    Divinedaodream2mth
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    Hello the development is going fine. Since you asked for opinion I will say that mc should not leave or abandon his gf right now as currently she is in a very vulnerable and shaken state. If mc leaves her right now then he too will be become a hypocrite as he decided to run away or brush aside her matter completely even after knowing her full forced situation with Chiku. In this way, he too will become like her who doesn’t want to solve the problem by working together plus the biggest point is if mc leaves then it will leave a permanent mark of regret on his mind where he could have done better as a good bf…… because in all honestly such a girl can even kill Herself in suicide or take some extreme step to do harm on herself in an act of self-regret which if mc knows later after leaving then it would definitely leave a heavy and sad regretful expression on his mind which may even leave a permanent shadow from which he may never be able to move on. Because I have seen in many books the girl usually start doing foolish things or harm herself when Mc leaves then mc blames on himself later saying he could have been a better person plus the gap created causes mc to confide in other girls which provides soothing relief thus adding more girls in the situation leading to a harem situation where readers are conflicted on which heroines to choose and story starts getting clumsy. The better way I suggest is that mc takes control of the situation and properly tames Emma and starts his journey to take revenge this is a perfect situation where he can make his yandere ex gf who is in desperate need of redemption accept his demands. She should be willing to make any concessions asked right now no matter how stubborn and grumpy her possessive personality is. Mc can also use this opportunity to make her accept his contact with other girls or tell her she will now have to listen to him and can’t interfere in whom he wants to talk to or tell her she is now in a trial period and her performance will tell future action or things similar while at the same time he starts his revenge journey on chiko and starts unravelling other mysteries.

    Ch 32 Chapter 32: Stop, Ema.
    I thought i could be happy
    Realistic · Ryukiro
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  • Divinedaodream
    Divinedaodream2mth
    Commented

    Now the story is looking much better and refined, very good job author. That’s how one should act maturely, confront and discuss properly, only then we can prevent any further manipulation and stress, and instead work together to save our future while in the process the one who have made mistakes redeem themselves with their actions.

    Ch 31 Chapter 31: Enough.
    I thought i could be happy
    Realistic · Ryukiro
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  • Divinedaodream
    Divinedaodream2mth
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    Yeah man on the one hand you are portraying that how much love and possessiveness Emma as a gf has towards mc while on the other hand you are continuously showing her as weak and afraid to confide in mc type who is always hiding things from mc instead of working together with him to solve their problems. Making her act and seem like a cheater even though you clearly said it’s not a cheating or a ntr type of book. Plus this drama is literally taking too long just like those FL misunderstanding books where such things stretches for 35 or 40 chapters or sometimes more or those online romantic dramas. If you take too long to develop the other readers might lose interest, hope everything with mc and Ema is sorted fast and they are together. Going with current pace, the mc development seems too slow, he instead of properly discussing and mending things with his gf and other people is acting on impulses just like a small child. Other than that writing quality is maintained.

    Ch 29 Chapter 29: Questions without an answer
    I thought i could be happy
    Realistic · Ryukiro
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  • Divinedaodream
    Divinedaodream2mth
    Replied to Ryukiro

    Sure I will definitely check other books as long Mc girlfriends or girls don’t cheat on him or sleep with others. Hope you have a good day.

    Ch 21 Chapter 21: An awkward situation
    I thought i could be happy
    Realistic · Ryukiro
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  • Divinedaodream
    Divinedaodream2mth
    Commented

    It’s about time that ema is fully tamed by mc.

    Ch 26 Chapter 26: Ema?
    I thought i could be happy
    Realistic · Ryukiro
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  • Divinedaodream
    Divinedaodream3mth
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    Great ch, ema seems a very possessive girlfriend which makes her look more adorable, hope mc can be direct like her and directly confide in her about the person who sent message on her phone, and their misunderstanding gets cleared very soon. She can be his best teammate with her current character. It seems she is forced or threatened because of some reason, I hope mc can team up with her to solve that mysterious person threatening or plotting against her.

    Ch 21 Chapter 21: An awkward situation
    I thought i could be happy
    Realistic · Ryukiro
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  • Divinedaodream
    Divinedaodream3mth
    Replied to GodOfDeath1999

    Author said Emma loves mc a lot and there is no cheating thing is there are lots of misunderstandings which will be cleared by mc as his character progresses. Plus author mentioned two times before already that mc is not ntred or get cheated upon, this is not that sort of book.

    Ch 20 Chapter 20: Following Ema , Part 2
    I thought i could be happy
    Realistic · Ryukiro
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  • Divinedaodream
    Divinedaodream3mth
    Commented

    Good ch.

    Ch 19 Chapter 19: Following Ema.
    I thought i could be happy
    Realistic · Ryukiro
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  • Divinedaodream
    Divinedaodream3mth
    Replied to Ryukiro

    Thanks so much for replying to my question dear author, you made my day! It’s so good to hear that mc girlfriend emma won’t be cheating on our mc, it just fills my heart with satisfaction that our mc won’t lose any of his girls and mc will win everything around him and develops in a beautiful way as he embarks on his journey full of satisfaction.

    I thought i could be happy
    Realistic · Ryukiro
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  • Divinedaodream
    Divinedaodream3mth
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    Thanks for the chapter can you please answer my question asked in book review section wether mc is a cuck and will lose his girlfriend ? The one from whom his girlfriend will be stolen please reply to my question asked in review section thank you dear.

    Ch 14 Chapter 14: Lies? Chiko?
    I thought i could be happy
    Realistic · Ryukiro
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  • Divinedaodream
    Divinedaodream3mth
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    Hello author the story is very good but please can you answer my question this is very important for me- is mc a cuck? Who will lose his woman including his girlfriend Emma? Because I am a very weak person from heart and usually stays depressed for a long time after reading cuckold and ntr stuff when I accidentally came across it and when such a thing it happens to our mc, I would love it if you could answer my question as it is very important for me and some like minded people to continue to read further.

    I thought i could be happy
    Realistic · Ryukiro
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  • Divinedaodream
    Divinedaodream1yr
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    Well when you wilk first reaD the book you will think you are reading some erotic stuff with very less story development and plot progression like watching short versions of hemmmntais Its only later that author speeds up the plot. Average 3.5-4 strs for me.

    Saga of The Night God
    Fantasy · J_a_zzy
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  • Divinedaodream
    Divinedaodream1yr
    Posted

    Very gooo very gooookkkkkkooookoooood fking goood luv ittttt

    Strongest Abandoned Son
    Urban · Goose Five
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  • Divinedaodream
    Divinedaodream1yr
    Replied to Krypton71

    Actually both of those have similar starting to the mtl version but in 2-4 chs the storyline changes completely.

    Ch 60 Qin Tian was happy that he didn't need much effort to put Ravel into his pocket
    The Heroine Eavesdropped on My Voice Heart
    Anime & Comics · DogLickerGods
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  • Divinedaodream
    Divinedaodream1yr
    Commented

    Amazing

    Ch 31 Chapter 31: The Third Wife.
    My Three Wives Are Beautiful Vampires.
    Fantasy · Victor_Weismann
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  • Divinedaodream
    Divinedaodream1yr
    Commented

    Op

    Ch 5 Death Penalty
    Cultivation Online
    Games · MyLittleBrother
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