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honestly Amazing work, too bad some ppl r too narrow-minded for their own good. Keep up the good work mate 🤠 Unique FF, Great story, cool Author, cool MC, Updates daily. worth the 25 stars ratings. As promised, here r the reviews n stones
The sheer contrast to how you have improved a lot, from the very first chapter to this latest. I don't know if you had hired an editor but keep up with the good work. Honestly If only you would edit the first chapters and correct everything from grammars to some plot holes which us native English readers would understand this would have started something new, A new theme that would attract readers. You have the potential as a writer and if you have shortcomings then ask for Someone's help, At your case is to find an editor which I don't know if you did but,,, Overall a potential read. good background as what i can tell plus interesting plot. I strongly advise for you to edit your work from the beginning and i assure you. a lot of people would enjoy this!!!
I enjoyed it tbh, u just wanna make sure to tolerate the grammar but overall it had potential, 'HAD' since it's been a yr without an update - I wonder what happened, i mean it's kind obvious with how affected the author is on the critique but i just truly winder if Author would atleast honour the story and those who enjoyed it by concluding the story, I would really appreciate it if author will provide appropriate closure for the story, it doesn't matter it's abrupt or anything i just want a closure for the story
Hey Author! My guy, Reading the comments and now it's getting confusing. It has harem right? MC inlove with them and they are inlove with him. So by what you have said on the sypnosis and here on the comments, will there be POLYAMOURY on this novel which not only MC accepts the harem but also the harem has a relationship with each other? Yuri? don't get me wrong that type of Romance is amazing but I'd still like to know atleast the MC is aware of it and he accepts it? So Mc and the Harem love each other right? poly relationship?