I didn't expect this, but I'm excited.

Nice!

moar!! too short 😭

same

I'm a bit late, nice chapter btw.

good idea, now I'm curious as well.

same same

Another great concept here, I love this kind of story. ..Also I like how you use simple words on this one, it's much more easier to understand and imagine how the scenario will play in my head. (P.s Can't wait for the next chap!!)

op

It's shiraori so... it's only natural that it has 5 stars.

agreed

As always, nice chapter 🥰

I've tried it. too early to judge whether its good or not but it's shiraori so... instant 5 stars

This chap is very exciting, can't wait for the next one.Also, I'm interested how will it affect spiderman, or will it ever affect him? I'm curious.

Is the chapter 28 missing? or maybe mispelled?

I did break the paragraphs and did spacing on my end. I don't know wt*f happen. goodluck reading!

Not that much of a chapter to properly say how good/bad the fic is but it's quite good for me. Quite a few things I've noticed.1. Grammar. I'm not sure if there is. maybe there is but my mind automatically fix it for me (I've read lots of chinese mtl). So far, it doesn't really ruin the story for me. 2. The inconsistent use of he/she. tbh I don't really mind whatever you choose. Just choose one and stick with it. 3. The mc will be a girl. I actually don't see any problem with it but lots of people do. Prob. they expect it to be an edgy, all powerfull, all knowing, harem seeking mc that bangs everyone that have holes down there. (no offence ;) ) 4. The mc name. again, many people is dissatisfied with this and quite hilarious to see them announcing that they are gonna stop reading the fic. like hell anyone care. its your phone. your account. and also your choice to click and read the fic. Also, my take on the name. It's not the worst. I admit I'm weirded out at first since its very unsual, but hey! the name rimuru is quite unusual to. also naming yourself anything aside from rimuru or something quite close(?) while using rimuru's body is not quite right for me. Imagine using rimuru's body and naming yourself random english name. It doesn't feel right to me. the same goes for any other name even japanese. Lastly, Is this chinese fic that is translated? Idk. not that I care but I can somehow sense from the phrase used.Thank you for reading this. (If you did read it all..., how bored are you?)

actually, it's Tensura not shura.

The slapping part is not just to see if the baby is alive. It is use to simulate the act of breathing. Although there is other method used today(depending on the availability of certain tools in the hospital and the preferrability of the person in charge). There is other use as to why is it done but I'm not going to get in depth with that.Also, it's not really slapping but more of gently tapping. (It's a baby!!)About the baby crying, yes, not all baby cry "Immediately" due to various reason. (Not crying immediately doesn't necessarily indicates problem with the baby.)