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Excellent story , Truthfully I did not expect it to be this good when i first started it . I binged all the 232 present chapters in 2 days now I am getting withdrawal symptoms . Writing quality is very good in my opinion , the only thing I felt that should be changed is that "the small hints " that we were supposed to catch up onto - Truth be told I can bet that 99% of the people here missed those hints . I feel that those hints should be in a bit more memorable so that when you revealed the thing we would have gone like "ohhhhhhhh!!!" . Story Development is excellent , cliche tropes are present but they are resolved in a not-so-cliche way I am not a great judge of Character development so I wont comment on it We have only scratched the surface of the world background, but whatever has been revealed is awesome and has had me hooked All in all it is a excellent story that I will watching closely Author-san I am rooting out for you
Actually this idea has been sitting around in my head for quite some time after I got to know about the "The rise and fall of the empire of a bored god - 'The Shandal Empire' ". Although the premise is very different I am still rooting out for you. Ps- Lets see if anybody can find where the reference came from HEHE
*Spits juice all over my laptop screen * *cough* *cough*
hmmm? i thought that every level would give some phisique advantages and also it seems improbable that the guards would not have 1 or 2 masters with speed increase type fae .... it seems i am wrong in this regard maybe the distribution of guards are more profound than it seems .
How suspicious . . . . . since you cant escape from pursuit why even bother being so suspicious?