CN i ask if u know what honghuang is since also want to brush up my proofreading skills using [I, The Big Boss of Honguang, join the chat group]

You truly know how to think outside the box, makes me jealous and I like how you explain how a quirk affects a person's psyche because a lot of authors don't delve into that and those that do are to realistic I like ff that are closely related to the original source with a dash of realism but with exciting twist, after all it's only the authors imagination that's the limit

I'm starting to like your so keep up the good work and I like how you seem to have a harem yet not since I think raditz did the deed with launch along with Bulma seeming interested and also introduction of a potential wafu

There are not that many good fimensional chat group fanfics and those that are single fm lead so I will definitely read it if you decided to write but hope you do it when you are not pressured and have free time

Hope you're u don't actually kill off any of the girls since tamed yandere is best yandere

Hey hey, don't diss Loli fetish

Fic is actually pretty good, don't see a problem but maybe I ts just me since I'm all for harem and 'plot' after all I believe in Every hole is a goal as long as it's cute and is not mine

Rich girl and mischievous senpai from COTE huh

It's hard being an author, good job hanging in there considering the sheer stupidity and negativity present in the animals called 'humans'