I can't take this anymore, the write up and wording needs to redone by an experienced editor because me reading this make's me want to puke because it feels like a 10 yr old wrote this. This book looks like it got potential but if this keeps up I'm dropping it

Some logic here that i find hard to believe 1, this mc has used a sword before but never tried to get any sort of skill related to it or a master to teach him the all of a sudden he learns the swordmastery on his own and now thinking of sword art or forms like how is that possible 2, he is trying to see if he can make a skill from an element he can't control except his berserk state

We all know the author got inspiration from arifureta but he is meant to atleast make the mc have a different hair color when mutating or something along that line instead of just putting down almost the same scenario while changing one or two

Hhmmm you make the mc sound superhuman when his strength and agility is that of an average human

I'm wondering if the wolf doesn't have claws or doesn't know how to use them