I am just wondering, will Hua'er ever come into light and become a great general herself?

Well, thank you so much. This is the first comment for my novel, and I am feeling so happy. Stay connected. Actually it is not a revenge story but yeah everyone will get their retribution.

A new author here. This is my first novel which I am writing which I do plan to complete. So please give your immense support and care to my new novel. A book to an author is like a child which is always special and best and I will try my best to give you the best version I can. That is why I gave it five stars. Please do tell what you like and dislike. Positive criticisms are welcomed. Do tell was there a character that made you feel connected. Who did you resonate with? I hope it would be an enjoyable read for you. I have so many expectations and I am feeling so many emotions that I can't explain. Did I rant too much?😂😂 Love love. [img=recommend][img=recommend]

Okay, I want a full story of Feng Ning in the modern setting, who else?[img=update]

I just want to know that are Shang Lang's intentions for marriage are pure or not?

Handsome Nan Hua![img=recommend][img=recommend]

I just find the attitude of whole family a bit wrong that the heirs of the family are the boys. I mean being set in the future timeline there should be more equality than FLOBF timeline. Although I believe that children have to make their own money but if you have to split something like inheritance it should be equal. I know for now Nan Hua is indeed not qualified for being the heir in their eyes but do they even consider her for their business or military? But ofcourse now that she has returned it is indeed the best to give her love and warmth rather than a strict training. Just waiting when her capabilities are revealed.

I am just waiting for her big brother to appear because it is a new relationship dynamic for Nan Hua. Why does her Mom hate her a bit? I don't think her behaviour is justifiable in anyway.

first time reading this. l absolutely loved FLOBF so reading its sequel I am expecting much from you Author sama . Liking the vibe of it similar but distinct. There is much more danger for Nan Hua here, she is not out of control of the organisation. And still have not bonded with the family yet. She doesn't have her own power here and have to hide herself and her strength from her family also unlike Forgotten legend where her grandfather gave her the power and freedom to chose and she was being herself in front of them. Can't wait to see how the story unfolds... But reading the novel from start is a bit tiring because you can't wait for updates, getting impatient lol.[img=update][img=update][img=update]

I really want to know that whether there will be character development for Nan Hua's mother. I really want her to be showered with love by her parents which was not possible in forgotten legend. Sadly, her mother here doesn't seem to be a good one

OMG, I am just waiting for Nan Hua's reveal in front of Qian Xing, is it just me or anyone else also?

After so long, we get to see the cousins, especially I want to see Feng Ao Si who hadn't been shown for the longest time[img=update][img=update]. Our Luo is finally meeting Hua'er. Excited to see what achievements Nan Hua will make with the Nan and Jun Hua alias as these alias has not been used that much.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]

The only figures that Nan Hua lacks in her life are parents. And to me Yan Xi feels like a mother to her. I hope both Nan Hua and Hui ling can find parent figures in their life.

Hui Ling feels like other version of Nan Hua, hope to see more of him. Not just as a subordinate( that he may become in upcoming parts) but as a person with family , a person who has a family to protect like Nan Hua, a human that he didn't get to become till now[img=update][img=update]

Although Nan Hua says she don't care much about people, her actions show otherwise. Seeing her giving so many chances to people and changing their fate warms my heart. I feel sad when she recall her past life. That is why maybe I love seeing her family interactions. I hope she could open more to Lou, Feng Ao Khai and her grandfather before her fiance. Author give my hug to Hua and that boy.[img=update]

A new author here shamelessly trying to promote my story. If you like it, please tell in the comments and keep reading; if you don't like my story then also tell me about your criticisms in the comments and keep reading to know if I improve. I am a newbie, so please be merciful to my writing and please tell about where should I improve. I hope you all love my story, did you ? Tell me about your favourite character and whom do you resonate with most in the comments. Lots of love to all my readers.[img=recommend]

Hi readers, hope you like my novel. Please do tell the good and bad aspects in the comments. This is my first novel so please shower it with love. I hope you will enjoy reading, do tell me about your favorite character or plot point. Whom did you connect to most?[img=recommend]