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  • CloudHopper
    CloudHopper1yr
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    Okay so Brother Li is probably a super powerful genius that either died early, or left to a higher place. I guess we'll see in due time.

    Ch 20 Personal Disciple or Husband?
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  • CloudHopper
    CloudHopper1yr
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    Intriguing chapter, excited to see what the test holds. As a whole I am not sure how this chapter compares to the previous ones but I enjoyed it nonetheless.

    Ch 14 Three Families, Three Options
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  • CloudHopper
    CloudHopper1yr
    Replied to jankian

    Glad you're enjoying the novel.

    Ch 41 Chapter 41 Similar Yet Different
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    The Struggling Cultivator
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  • CloudHopper
    CloudHopper1yr
    Replied to Yozuka

    To be honest I enjoy info dumps, but I've found people complaining on similar chapters. (maybe I am just misremembering) Personally though I enjoyed the chapter.

    Ch 13 Martial Emperor Physique
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  • CloudHopper
    CloudHopper1yr
    Commented

    A bit info dumpy but I like the world building, Martial Emperor Zhang sounds interesting. From the fact that he defeated not killed an entire Sect, shows that he wasn't a deranged maniac at least. The physique also sounds interesting, and at least explains Zhang Baichi's insane combat talent.

    Ch 13 Martial Emperor Physique
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  • CloudHopper
    CloudHopper1yr
    Commented

    This chapter was great. Firstly confirmation that my guess was correct, good ego stroke. Secondly this Elder is actually intelligent and not trashy. Thirdly special constitution time! Can't wait for the next chapter, thank you very much for the chapter.

    Ch 12 Detained
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  • CloudHopper
    CloudHopper1yr
    Replied to Josuwa

    I am a bit confused, this is Zhao Wuji's diary. Was something not clear???

    "I leave this here for anyone lucky enough to find it, I was Zhao Wuji Batch 894, a naive idiot. Quit cultivation, you'll only regret continuing in the end."
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  • CloudHopper
    CloudHopper1yr
    Replied to LittleVamp

    Glad you enjoyed the chapter.

    Ch 38 Chapter 38 Peerless Ox
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  • CloudHopper
    CloudHopper1yr
    Replied to lord_of_all_realm_

    Well if you want my reasoning as the author. It may seem like a short time has passed as the reader, and for even I the author, but in novel time. Mo Xiaowen and Old Ox have been meeting each other every day for almost a year. The only people they speak to in the Sect and in general (besides business) is each other. As well as the Senior Brother Old Ox has a sense of responsibility for Mo Xiaowen. While Old Ox is somewhat naive at times I hope I didn't really portray him as such. The red beam is somewhat relevant but that will be explained much later with the vague plan I currently have, but you've been pretty close in your theories.

    Ch 38 Chapter 38 Peerless Ox
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  • CloudHopper
    CloudHopper1yr
    Commented

    The legendary Whack-A-Mole technique and the deluxe edition at that? If he isn't a spy then who is? The Sect Master? He's obviously a foreign cultivator! Thanks for the chapter.

    Ch 10 Law Enforcement Division's Investigation
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  • CloudHopper
    CloudHopper1yr
    Commented

    Very cool, getting Intents early. System is a bit of a troll I won't lie, but at least it gets to the point. Pace has naturally slowed somewhat but its a good speed, next chapter's new sword technique looks cool. Thanks for the chapter.

    Ch 7 Duel Between Swordsmen
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  • CloudHopper
    CloudHopper1yr
    Commented

    Hmmm so for now his combat prowess is somewhat ambiguous, because body alone sure he's 7th Layer but in conjunction with his Qi would that make him 10th Layer in strength? Or could he even content with those in the higher Realm? I guess we'll see in the coming chapters. Thanks for the chapter.

    Ch 6 Superior Cultivation Technique's Strength
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  • CloudHopper
    CloudHopper1yr
    Replied to Yozuka

    Yes its not possible to vote power stones on your novel. Also as an author you can vote power stones for your own book. I have no clue why its not possible to vote on your book though, it could be because it has too little word count or a while back I heard something about approvers. But I don't know anything concrete to be honest. Maybe try contact a Webnovel editor? Either way I hope the issue gets resolved for you.

    Ch 6 Superior Cultivation Technique's Strength
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  • CloudHopper
    CloudHopper1yr
    Commented

    Seems like things are coming together, next chapter he should start exploding in Realm so that's gonna be hype. Besides that I guess the fist sized Dantian is part of Zhang Baichi's special physique, and also I'd assume the reason why original Zhang Baichi cultivated slowly despite his physique. (that or its because his meridians and dantian stayed as big as they were before he abolished his cultivation but in that case I doubt he'd ask that question since it'd be the logical conclusion) Black Heaven Qi sounds interesting, and also the whole can only stick to one cultivation technique actually makes sense since that will explain how Zhang Baichi will one day surpass the old man. Thanks for the chapter

    Ch 5 Zhang Baichi, Regular Mortal
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  • CloudHopper
    CloudHopper1yr
    Commented

    Seems interesting, Lu Hao seems like muscular good friend who's always got the Mc's back. I wonder how effective the Blood Qi pills will be and the Black Heaven Scripture seems like an intriguing cheat. All in all good chapter, thanks Author.

    Ch 3 A Blood Feud Already
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  • CloudHopper
    CloudHopper1yr
    Replied to Yozuka

    Aight glad to hear that. Personally on the harem issue I am neither here nor there, but I am glad that even if there is one it won't just be "gotta catch em all" style. Seems like this will be a good novel to keep up to date with. Thanks once again.

    Ch 2 Reincarnation With A System...?
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  • CloudHopper
    CloudHopper1yr
    Commented

    Quite interesting so far, I like the fact that the System is explained instantly, and that we're actually given the perspective of the old man to begin with. Can't wait to see Zhang Baichi's journey. Apart from that just a few questions. I don't mind young masters, but is every villain going to be a young master, or are there gonna be some proper antagonists. Haremwise, I just want to know if he's going to be collecting them like pokemon or not. I don't mind harem or no harem personally, but if it gets excessive like 10+ in 300 chapters, not really my thing. Besides that this is more of a question out of curiosity, since the system was given by the old man, will it become obsolete in future, or be upgraded over time? If the answer is a spoiler then I am fine not knowing the answer. Thanks for the chapter.

    Ch 2 Reincarnation With A System...?
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  • CloudHopper
    CloudHopper1yr
    Replied to Capt_Eye_Collector

    I am glad you're enjoying Mo Xiaowen and his journey, thank you for the review.

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  • CloudHopper
    CloudHopper1yr
    Replied to lilhawk

    For now I haven't made a discord server or anything, if I do make one it will be some time in the future. Also thanks for the review.

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  • CloudHopper
    CloudHopper1yr
    Replied to lord_of_all_realm_

    Thank you very much for the review.

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