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MrSimo

MrSimo

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just your average reader with a dislike for cultivation novels(Open Harem Hater).

2022-06-07 JoinedSweden
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  • MrSimo
    MrSimo4h
    Replied to boredFish

    F#cking snowflakes

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    MHA : Shoto Todoroki - Modern-day Terrorist
    Anime & Comics · Nar_cisse
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  • MrSimo
    MrSimo4h
    Replied to SupremeKaz

    i hate the fact you didn't add a spoiler to this comment you as#hole

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    One Piece: Ragnarok
    Anime & Comics · Ragnarok98
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  • MrSimo
    MrSimo4h
    Replied to theonlyjesus

    he's just giving constructive criticism you fool

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    One Piece: Ragnarok
    Anime & Comics · Ragnarok98
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  • MrSimo
    MrSimo2d
    Replied to MrSimo

    yikes what was I smoking when I wrote this a year ago. but ya the quality has dropped tbh

    Both of them rush at each other and everyone gets nervous to the point they stop their fights. Buggy and Garp then send their full-powered punches at each other.
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    Transcended as Lord Buggy
    Anime & Comics · Capt_mermain1
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  • MrSimo
    MrSimo12d
    Commented

    one more thing reading massive blocks of texts is off putting for most readers I suggest formatting your paragraphs into smaller more manageable chunk so the readers don't get lost when reading. Your's truly a concerned reader.

    Ch 2 Chapter 1: Good Morning Blacksmith
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    Blacksmith of hero society
    Anime & Comics · Mart_Lopez
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  • MrSimo
    MrSimo12d
    Commented

    it's looking good but you should look up the proper way to use the word "and". I've noticed a lot of run on sentences. you need to figure that out. look it up on YouTube that will help I'm sure. gl

    Ch 2 Chapter 1: Good Morning Blacksmith
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    Blacksmith of hero society
    Anime & Comics · Mart_Lopez
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  • MrSimo
    MrSimo13d
    Replied to Pekokopiko

    thx

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    Lord of Fire
    Anime & Comics · Immanuel_Hanadaob
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  • MrSimo
    MrSimo20d
    Replied to MrSimo

    ment 12

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    Stuck In The Cyberverse
    Anime & Comics · No_Existence
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  • MrSimo
    MrSimo20d
    Posted

    I was getting to like the story and all the interesting plot developments, but after the author turned the story into a harrem I lost interest. good first 25 chapters though.

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    Stuck In The Cyberverse
    Anime & Comics · No_Existence
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  • MrSimo
    MrSimo20d
    Replied to No_Existence

    wait what

    Ch 23 22- Hidden Mastermind or Depresso Expresso, Innocent Puppy?
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    Stuck In The Cyberverse
    Anime & Comics · No_Existence
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  • MrSimo
    MrSimo20d
    Replied to MrSimo

    it wasnt

    "I don't know how his brain works, but I've never seen a human get strong without at the very least, having a system. Instead of becoming a gamer, the blonde bastard chose to rely on himself."
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    Transmigrated With A Time Chamber In DxD
    Anime & Comics · HolyGambler
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  • MrSimo
    MrSimo23d
    Commented

    looking good but if this becomes a harem I'm dropping it

    Ch 23 22- Hidden Mastermind or Depresso Expresso, Innocent Puppy?
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    Stuck In The Cyberverse
    Anime & Comics · No_Existence
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  • MrSimo
    MrSimo25d
    Commented

    9

    Ch 23 22- Hidden Mastermind or Depresso Expresso, Innocent Puppy?
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    Stuck In The Cyberverse
    Anime & Comics · No_Existence
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  • MrSimo
    MrSimo25d
    Commented

    Monika and cyberpunk

    Ch 23 22- Hidden Mastermind or Depresso Expresso, Innocent Puppy?
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    Stuck In The Cyberverse
    Anime & Comics · No_Existence
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  • MrSimo
    MrSimo28d
    Posted

    it was looking great but I think he got to strong to fast. the story was rushed. by chapter 7 he's basically un killable. there's no tention In the story so ya that's my review.

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    MHA : Adaptation
    Anime & Comics · RenegadeJack
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  • MrSimo
    MrSimo30d
    Replied to MagikarpBombado

    thx for the save il keep my distance from this story

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    BNHA: Accelerator The Strongest Hero
    Anime & Comics · Yeye_Qiu
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  • MrSimo
    MrSimo1mth
    Commented

    thx for the chap

    Ch 22 21- Our Hero~...
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    Stuck In The Cyberverse
    Anime & Comics · No_Existence
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  • MrSimo
    MrSimo1mth
    Commented

    yay new chap

    Ch 21 20- Just Cal... Wait What?
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    Stuck In The Cyberverse
    Anime & Comics · No_Existence
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  • MrSimo
    MrSimo1mth
    Commented

    +!

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    A Tensura Elf in Danmachi
    Anime & Comics · SleepySailor
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  • MrSimo
    MrSimo1mth
    Replied to tido_racks

    i'm sorry for you Genshin player

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    A Tensura Elf in Danmachi
    Anime & Comics · SleepySailor
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