In later chapters quality has improved.

Definitely needs an editor. But it is good novel. There are knights so I like it hehehe If you correct your grammar this novel will have potential.

How could he not notice that he had hole in his hand?

Love the story with any knights so it good for me :D Dfdfdfdfdfdfdfdfdfdfdfdfdfdfdfdfddfdfdfdfdffddfdfdfdfdfdhjhcd hdsdgd 140 charactersssss