I know what you want to convey to the readers by writing "how", but that only fellow indonesian can understand. I am not so good in english, but i think you can make better impression by using "so? do you accept it" or "what do you think? do you agree?"

You can just copy some word in the paragraph and paste them in google to see similiar article so you can see if it is original fan fiction or not.

Winter truncheon

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