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kingsley_zaria

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  • kingsley_zaria
    kingsley_zaria9mth
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    The MC is very slow and not proactive . All his actions are reactive and there's almost no progression kind terms of his growth.

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    Genius Daddy in the City
    Urban · Beneath the Lonely Mountain Tree
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  • kingsley_zaria
    kingsley_zaria9mth
    Posted

    Why is he going around doing shit instead of improving ? the whole plot looks stupid

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    Starting With One Million Luck Points
    Eastern · I am Second Senior
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  • kingsley_zaria
    kingsley_zaria10mth
    Posted

    The line of actions taken over and again shows how stupid, the MC is displayed as. Very poor storytelling

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    Limitless
    Urban · Sharp Knife
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  • kingsley_zaria
    kingsley_zaria10mth
    Posted

    Am I the only one who thinks the story was poorly developed 🤷. He was supposed to be a sealer from the title but he makes use of every other power but the sealing one with almost no progress in it for more than 70% of the book. He was developing towards being anything but what the book said he was.

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    I Shall Seal The Heavens
    Eastern · Er Gen
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  • kingsley_zaria
    kingsley_zaria10mth
    Replied to I_Am_Immortal

    most times I found it really stupid. The title says "I shall seal the heavens", but he literally goes through more than half the story, not being what the story makes him out to be or says he should be. He uses every other power but not the one of being a sealer for almost all through the book, so can't make sense of the title throughout the book.

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    I Shall Seal The Heavens
    Eastern · Er Gen
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  • kingsley_zaria
    kingsley_zaria1yr
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    The decision making of the Main character is terrible. He even had to sell himself as a slave, that's a very low depiction for a main character. Story progression is stagnant and weak story telling

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    Fury Towards The Burning Heaven
    Eastern · Yao Ye
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