bro over reliant on system by both mc and story

bro can't find new novel

bro i think u should erase certain elements otherwise this story will not be well received .

i think i sort of misunderstood they are para comments

bro did u check ur previous paragraph comments , i kinda mentioned the errors

you are too slow

I can help u correct these grammatical errors

bro are u perhaps writing and translating this novel

i think we are missing some kind of political drama of slice of life

hello

dude I like this novel write more chapters , don't make this novel pay up novel .

no need for he after those

deeds not dead

word mistake

bro u are u using Hari for hurry

create not great

do u have any plan of making this novel pay up novel

u should try make it a international event

I am waiting for drama between sushila and Ashoka ,the story is repeating the same sequence

any other story like this