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Zbara_15771dCommentedit's definitely too quick, you'll be writing your own plotholes. In 10 minutes, he's completely restored to perfect health? It'll be immediately noticed everything after he exercises or spars that he's back to perfect health. Plot hole if ignored. plot hole if it's not ignored, but nothing done about it. Reducing it by a factor of 10 will still make it so hes back from the brink of dearh in under 2 hours. implement perks and skills to incrementally increase it. or Debuffs.
(A/N: Do you think the Regen is too quick? Should I lower it?)- Zbara_15771dReplied to Casual7
I'm gonna go out on a limb here and say; the system is not op; abilities stack well later down the line; most of the strength will come from mc training instead of handouts
[Activating the skill increases running speed by 10% -> 11%] - Zbara_15771dCommented
rather the evil you know than the stranger you don't
'Konoha is the basic option, so it would be quite cool and interesting if I chose another village like Komo... but, I'd be stupid to enter unknown land. It's better to choose a place I know really well. So, Konohagakure it is!' He decided. - Zbara_15771dCommentedCh 14 RoWE - Chapter 14
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It's lord Paramount, not Duke.
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bros an egg
Aeg was not prepared, nor did he intend, to become disabled on his first day of crossing over. Thus, he was sent to Castle Black as a criminal and became a "glorious" member of the Night's Watch. As for the name "Aeg," it was a nickname given to him by the villager who caught him, and it became his name in a muddled fashion. - Zbara_15772dCommented
what...
Even at this moment this entire exchange was being recorded and broadcast across the region so I knew that revealing my new eye came with pros and cons. The pros were that it would allow me to notice any tells that her pokemon had before they used a move and outside of this battle would help prevent issues when I was undoubtedly asked to remove my eyepatch in the future. The cons were just as simple as well as it would give others a gauge of how serious I was taking them and also gave out important information that the assassins would need to take into account.- - Zbara_15772dCommentedCh 2 Chapter 2
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you repeated form the previous paragraph here
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HANK! DO NOT ABBREVIATE TO CP!! HAAAANK!!!
World of Darkness: Sorcery - The Flow of Ki - 1̶0̶0̶ C̶P Free - Zbara_15772dCommented
bro...
We met up for several weeks in a row before I finally made my move on her. With a slight touch on her hands, a blush when she teased me for being foward. We eventually started making out and finally led to having sex. - Zbara_15772dCommented
one of the things people forget that while jjk is a really weak verse compared to other anime, there is that a few characters that have abilities that are extremely scalable to other works, as they alter/negate concepts. Yorozus infinite ball and Hollow purple both negate defensive abilities. Limitless negates every attack. Tsukumo breaks physics. So it doesn't matter how powerful someone is. If thanos can't dodge a world dismantle, he's dead. same with the other abilities on any powerful character if they aren't suited to directly deal with the attack.
Every single mutant here, including Cyclops, he was sure he could defeat one way or the other but when it came to Storm, an omega-level mutant with nearly nigh-infinite potential and power, he knew better than to try and fight her. Especially without knowing how to use domain expansion or Reverse Cursed Techniques and his current power level of only 2 fingers which would prove useless. - Zbara_15772dCommented
just kill them all, then no problem
"Would you take over his job if I do?" Kai asked with a hint of seriousness in his tone before he began chuckling at Nathan's surprised experience, "Fisk is a necessary evil. He is careful and ruthless, a good leader perhaps. With him, almost all the major gangs and organizations in NewYork remain under control but if he were to die, the whole city would likely be in chaos." - Zbara_157713dCommented
Running form is very important, so dexter should have some affect on top speed.
[Your running speed or agility depends on STR, END, and DEX. Your strength decides how far you can travel with each step, obviously determining your top speed. Your stamina decides how far you can go before you get tired. Your dexterity decides your balance, and control over how fast you want to go. For statistics nerds, 1 point in STR and DEX combined equals 1 AGI point, which is worth around 0.77m/s for each point.] - Zbara_157715dCommented
huh, what is he had made a binding vow to only use his technique once, to make it stronger. Technically the only reason he can't use it multiple times is because his CT surpasses the human limits.
Kashimo can't match Naoya in raw speed without using his cursed technique, which can only be used once. - Zbara_157716dCommentedBut on my first try I really don't want to be too perfectionist because I don't even know what I'm doing. It's gonna end up I'm not even gonna move forward.
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maybe pick a martial art from another fic, like re taekwondo or water stream rock smashing fist, that the mc can learn. im partial to Re taekwondo
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