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One of them is missing and he made no effort to find her other that telling his subordinate to search for her and he say’s he would never abandon them hmm what can we say Chinese logic
So to protect them he brought them in this dangerous city for expedition , bro you need more logic here it doesn’t make sense
They were a slaves controlled by an organisation how did they became scammers lol bro you can’t change the plot mid way
Cover her mouth so her screams don’t be heard and attract the zombies a tv explode doesn’t attract them logic out of the window
Why is there so manny plot twist and climax first he is born in a society that discriminate against him just because he has different hair and eye color wich make no sense and look childish for high school stuted to bully him for just for this reason second his father disowned him just because a Little girl was board and wanted to make his life hell and then regretted which i don’t know what to feel and say shoud i be sad or happy for him third you have him for no apparently any reason go smuggling for a quick bucks and then join the underworld because he was beaing threatened and the mc is just pushed around by them to do their biding and this the first mc in a novel i see so easily manipulated forth i understand you want to remain mysterious about the plot and added just dark in the tags but betrayal and death of a heroine is dark on onther level so i would appreciate next time so i can be prepared psychological very different writing style from TOS ther if a person touch bregnar wife hair he and his country will be sent to hell in this novel the only thing i see him do after the death of his lover is crying and drinking in his room wich I find wird for a mc
Why not cut the grass from the root I find it stupid like he tried to kill you and now you let him go like this I am 99% sure that him and his family are going to take revenge and what about his master I don’t think he will let you go like this don’t make the Mc plain stupid like a little ignorant kid that is so naive exploring the world
Lol the Mc took like two years to arrive at “b” rank even with his cheat now you’re telling me there is thousands ”a” rank criminals this desn’t make sens or the world population is so big to have to have that much criminals or the big guys in the government are so useless that they can’t catch them I can see this plot so forced here