thanks

I understand why you did it and I felt like it would be like this. but still I really hope you can decide to formalize their relationship. It's a bit unpleasant to see a relationship hanging like that. but thanks.

continue, please....

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Maya

Dr. Mei is part of the harem? I hope so, really. I'm quite traumatized by the honkai fanfic I've ever read. In that fanfic, after mc was close to dr.mei for a long time, he fell in love with kevin who came out of nowhere, it really hurt. So, I beg you, in this fanfic don't let mc in NTR. and also don't let there be any romance stories other than mc.

Honestly I was disappointed, I thought May would be with Mc. Because the impression is like that, starting from meetings, long distance relationships, and separations. Even May to shed tears try. Just met once, May fell in love with Kevin? hah... (sighs) I'll stop first, because it's quite traumatizing, I hope to forget this. Don't get me wrong, this fanfic is good, it's just that it bothers me too much to continue with the next story.

I haven't read all of them because I'm disappointed. To be honest, if dr.mei is not going to be added to the harem, then from the start don't make an impactful impression. If in the end Dr.Mei will stay with Kevin, then why at the beginning of the story Mei seems to really like the MC. It has an ntr effect, and I hate that mc gets hit by ntr. When it comes to character development, then don't make it sound like mc fits Dr.mei. At the beginning of the story they get along very well and have a lot of impressions. Unlike Kevin who appears out of nowhere and then Mei likes him? What the hell. Indeed in the original story dr.mei with Kevin, but what I know is dr.mei in this story, not in the original story. If dr.mei isn't added to the harem, I hope you remove dr.mei's togetherness with mc, but honestly I'd prefer mc to be with dr.mei because the impression is so deep. If it changes the future direction then make something that allows it. it's easy with some imagination.

It was good at first and I enjoyed. But in the middle of the story I'm disappointed with this fanfic because the woman is still married to the character in the Naruto world even though she already loves the main character, for example Temari. netore can but Ntr is damn. If it changes the original plot. Nonsense about the original plot, influential characters in boruto can still exist without having to sleep with the original woman even though it's illogical, but from the start this fanfic is not science fiction. The main character who let his woman marry someone else is trash, damn it's worse than that.

If this has anything to do with the Dominator In Naruto fanfic, then damn you. I'm already disappointed with the novel because a character who is still married to a character in the world of Naruto even though he already loves the main character, for example, Temari. But at least it's not too bad because Tsunade is fine. And what the hell is this fanfic. Damn trash, if this has anything to do with the Dominator In Naruto Fanfic.

Ada yang tau kontak author nya? ratu medusa nunggu giliran, soalnya dah lama