are we glossing over that his last name would have been on his acceptance letter or? 👀 ahhh… yes yes, for the plot i know

I really enjoyed it. How one can be overly affectionate but still platonic. To show unconditional love. To feel the weight of the world but still not give up. To wish for a better world for your family. To be proactive in hunting your enemy whilst being cunning enough not to let your enemy get too close. To allow people second chances. I think this version of the Marauders’ where they had one more brain in their group, one more intimate member that was watching over them from the outside whilst still knowing what was happening inside was a really good idea. Having a twin sister, to humble James, to genuinely care for and accept Remus, to love Sirius and to be cautious of Peter was what they needed and they were still the Marauders. They still goofed off and pranked others, they still had their brotherhood and the future left them many descendants so … I’m so happy for them. Hermione has always been my hero. A girl that wanted to make a difference. All those that hate Hermione only remember her as the bossy little Know-It-All from books 1 & 2 and forget that she was a snot nosed 11 year old that thought herself more mature than she was. This FF was definitely wish fulfilment in every way I wanted Hermione to use her smarts - to change the Wizengamot, to create a Ladies Aide Society for activism, the establishment of the Muggleborn Lending Library and the Pythagorus School. She was a reverred War Hero that had her voice heard and respected in a society predominately run by men. It made these men that refused their wives of joining the Order of the Phoenix to pause and take an actual look at the women that they married, the daughters that they raised and remember that they, too, are strong. Another note, the Order of the Lioness … yum. LMFAO. LUCIUS … yum. Okay, that’s all.

… like this?

who is that? 😂

My predictions were all wrong 💀🥲

Hmm~~ … Ima send out a prediction: Heskel could probably end up with Aunty Georgine … was the tragedy of the one that got away literally someone Georgine could not fall in love with? A werewolf? Georgine and the children’s dynamic would be super funny. I feel they’ll cosy up to her and make her soft 😂 … and was this chapter titled Timothy to hint at the ML??? 👀 it can’t be someone she already knows, since she tried a romance arithmacy thing-y and couldn’t see anything ~~ and CAUSE HE FEELS LIKE HER TYPEEEEE 1. Good Cook. 2. Rugged 3. Family Oriented 4. Had a pretty tough life, I feel he’ll understand her 5. HE CAN COOK. y’all gossip with me in the comments. cos i cant be the only one feeling this way 👏🏼

If you’re looking for something sweet. Something short. Something happy, then this is for you. A young philathropist with a diabolical appetite and a gift at making humans and beasts alike, fall in love with his charm. With his goofy personality, he faces a world of prejudices with a smile on his face and changes how they sees him. Did I mention he’s Luck personified? Like his blood is literal Felix Felicis.

its a bit off putting that they have this room … just in their house … do her parents use that equipment?? does her grandfather?? Its okay if its a private room for you and your partner but its not the type of room you just pass on to your teenage, virgin daughter 🤠 unless you’re absolute freaky deeky… then this adds an element of “flavour” to the Yaoyorozu household 😈😂

IGNORE HIM ETHAN. DON’T SUCCUMB TO HIS AGENDA.

i came for the review and stayed for the beeeeeeef 👀🍿

An ambiguous ending is so fitting. Tho I think, Max needs a trilogy 🥲 I’m not ready to see my boy go. I want his growth, his travels … Hermione eventually breaking from him is very canon for her character and I approved, no matter how sad it made me. Her and Max staying as friends, is also such a Max thing to do. Dephine as a potential lover? 👀 Suitability is there, I also approve. Bellatrix as super aunt? I never realised how powerful her bond with her family was. But do I forgive her for her sins? IDK, its not up to me but I want to see what Max would do with her. Nacissa … let her stay as a sibling - the fact that Max held on to her based on her tenderness when he was born, even at the knowledge that he was a squib was cute, but seeing the way she raised Draco was … disappointing for a witch of her caliber (even if most of it is Lucius’ fault) The bias with Umbridge and the Weasleys 💀😹 Why is my sweet Mrs Molly so unreasonable in this FF💀😹 but Umbridge seemed like she was reasonable and an overly dedicated deputy minister. Emphasis on reasonable💀 I didn’t realise it was finished until I finished 😢 Ty for the content 🪄✨

sauce?

It was okay. A lot of what was happening needed a bit more detail but overall I got what was happening and felt it was pretty good for what it was. I wish it was a bit more fleshed out on what heppened during the timeskips or even what happened to Akatsuki after Zetsu switched sides. How did Kuro and Ino meet again? Is Anko there as a lover or a retired Mentor? Did Konan betray Nagato? (*I know there was a bit about this that I skimmed over, if someone can remind me, that’d be cool). Also wanted more of the Cat Sactuary 🥺 I did like how it didn’t dwell too heavily on Naruto canon - instead, canon was happening in the background and MC used that to get what he wanted.

I enjoyed it lmao as far as fanfics and harems go, this was a better one. Sad that it stopped updating :( hope the author reconsiders~ camping until then~~

* photo of Yami Uchiha * …

who?? ronaldinho 🥹😂

I love you Renly <3 Sad about the slow updates but enjoyed the ride none the less. The character Renly was of course my favourite. An actor in the pursuit of the most challenging, most perfect preformance. His responses against adversity and his wit. His unrelentingly elegence and gentlemanly manner. His aura power outweighting muscle power. All chef’s kisses. The little ‘fan fiction’ bits of how existing actors would react to ‘Renly’ was also an enjoyable experience, especially Chris Hemsworth, Vin Diesel and Ryan Reynolds being such adverse characters. Similarly I could see someone like Renly becoming close buddies with Ryan Gosling and Paul Walker. Honestly I envisioned Renly writing the song, ‘See you Again’ at the news of Paul Walker’s death, even playing a big brother role for his daughter like he does for Hazel. Overall an enjoyable experience. Cannot wait to read more xx