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Why make a mc like that if you're just gonna lower his stats? What's next? I really don't wanna be a scum or anything like that, but man it is unpleasant when authors do that
In a world like this, I really don't get how such a thing will be "hard to believe". Like, everything else can happen, but a soul entering a dead person's body is just too out of this world?
The second body already mastered all martial arts though
My man's tryna gaslight someone's gender 😭
The mc will be able to reach really high tiers, right? I tend to choose an op mc over a weak one, but since this is a ptj fanfic, I enjoy a not very powerful mc in the beginning as long as he won't be trashed around and actually gets stronger
Another essay incoming, so be prepared. I did not read the first version of the last chapter, but I think I got the gist of it. I know it's hard to please everyone, even more so when everyone has different limits and perspectives. For example, I would have drawn the line when/if she f-ed him and I could continue reading (of course, if I wouldn't have been reminded every single chapter just how much she's obsessed with him and how she abandoned her kids for him) till the mc conquered her, so I get your point of it being more thrilling to steal a husband-lover wife, but I also get some reader's point of not liking such thing because it brings more drama. All in all, it was not the best decision you had but, while I appreciate that you changed it into something more light hearted, it was definitely not the worst thing you could've thought of. Other than that, good job with this first volume man, it was really cool. Looking forward to seeing what you have in store with your next ones.
So did Davey, right?
Wrong pronouns everywhere. She's a girl, not a guy
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You are using a little bit too much "man-eating monsters"