I guarantee you 200% If this story had a cover with Sukaina on it instead of the boring generic red background, you would have gotten much more views. So if that’s what you wanted, you should have started there.

The writing quality is absolutely terrible: mistakes, using different verb tenses and repeating words on the same sentence, and overall very simple descriptions. The premise is interesting, the potential for a good story is there, but unfortunately, the road to get there seems to be so steep and full of obstacles, it might not even exist altogether. I also don't really enjoy artificially making a villain evil by writing about rape every other chapter.

I'm sorry but the early chapters are in dire need of a rewrite. The quality is awful, the descriptions are simple, no punctuation, and grammar mistakes everywere. Reading ahead, the quality gets better. But as it stands, the early parts are way too painful to read.