What a nice chapter. Thank you.

Carl El and Joe El?? 🤦🤦🤦 Pls. for the love of DC, can you edit their names pls. It will be highly appreciated if you do. Thank you!

The names are always misspelled since the previous chapter but still thanks for the chapter.

Ah so this is a remake of the original from fanfiction.net. Keep it! 👏

thanks for the chapter and more pls

Good concept but needs editing. Readable but due to grammar errors, the flow of the narrative is distorted and a bit annoying for me. I suggest you look for an editor to help you out.Over all, still a good concept for a fanfiction and I would like to read an edited version of it.

old man? probably a tranny

Machine translation? If it is then, its the reason for my low rating.

thanks for the chapter.. I need more hehehe

keep 'em chapters coming.. Thanks

thanks for the chapter. I really like your fanfic. cant wait for more..

Nice! Keep them chapters coming ans thanks for not dropping this novel.

Thanks for the chapter

moooooorrrrreeeee

This is a gem. I don't know why it is not in the top 20 list for fanfics but I am loving every chapter written. Kudos to you author, keep up the good work and hope you won't drop this one like most of the good ones here on webnovel. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

Thanks for the chapter. Just a suggestion, run your chapters through grammarly to make it a bit better. Keep up the good work.

It was nice but Sakura!!! But first of all, the writing is all good. No major grammar mistake and enjoyable read so far BUT sad to say I'm dropping this one. Naruto's obsession with SAKURA is disgusting. No sane man would keep on obsessing with a girl like her even if you put it that the two versions are different. Still kodus to the author, just don't mind us readers who really don't like Sakura. Ciao!

This novel of yours is good. Hope you keep on writing.

Is this being dropped by the author?

Thanks for the chap but very short, unlike the previous one.