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Sylvest9mthPostedwriting quality, stability of update, character design are good. Its good to read a romantic story, the starting is well. But the confusion between Ml is interesting. I cant say who is the Ml after reading the first 10 chapters. But whatever it is i like paul's personality. I think he is the Ml but if he if make him a good character, his character seems villain. BUt it's your story i am just giving my opinion.
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this kind of love makes me laugh and i enjoy it. it likes i can't have but i can you forcefully,.
'I'm going to teach you how to obey me tonight and make you my prisoner,' Paul murmured to himself. - Sylvest9mthCommented
i see so he ias ml
I took the shower so long because I did not want his smell on my body. I did not have the courage to say what happened last night. But if I had said it, I would not have had the courage to say the truth. From the core of my heart, I knew the truth about what I had for Paul. - Sylvest9mthCommented
is he villain or ml?
I don't give a damn if you like me or not. I'd like to have you like this every night. Nobody is going to stop me. Even your father? - Sylvest1yrReplied to Nisa_Laiqadar
should i give spoiler? :v
"Adela, I hate you. When we first meet, I wish I could kill you." - Sylvest1yrReplied to Leni_Purwanti
should i give spoiler? :v
Her tone became weak. However, the moment that girl saw Adela in agony, she burst out laughing. "By killing you, I am only making things easier for the prince," the girl claimed. "After all, he'll kill you either now or tomorrow". - Sylvest1yrCommentedCh 9 I was fool
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does he like adela?
"Francis, What's up? The last time we met was a month ago. I'm so glad you returned from the battle unharmed and securely," Adela said, as she started asking him questions. She felt incredibly grateful that God had given her another chance. If that didn't happen, she'd never see Francis smile again. - Sylvest1yrCommentedCh 6 Camilla
- Sylvest1yrCommentedCh 5 Pet
- Sylvest1yrCommentedCh 3 Alive
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i thought it would be but i like the flow
Inhaling deeply, Adela opened her eyes and sat up on the bed right away. She gasped for air. She found it impossible to accept what she was seeing. - Sylvest1yrCommentedCh 2 Is this end?
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waiting for prince , where is he?
Her tone became weak. However, the moment that girl saw Adela in agony, she burst out laughing. "By killing you, I am only making things easier for the prince," the girl claimed. "After all, he'll kill you either now or tomorrow". - Sylvest1yrCommented
in this war adela lost him
Francis attempted to call her name, but he could not do so properly. She had, however, refrained from using her power to utterly devastate everything here.