was nice at first but then got bland with mc getting stupid each chap...just continue your other two novels than this one author. Also most of the chps are fillers...other 2 books was far better than this

writing got alot wrose lately and mc doesn't have a brain, even worse than mc of cultivation online. Also author stop this crap and start continuing Cultivation Online!

bruh I totally agree! but it's going to be deleted by MLB lol

tags are about mc...whole story is about mc because guess what? he the FRICKING MC!

thats not how tag works dude...as per you a novel with dumb mc who makes mistakes every 2 minutes but there is a scientist inside the novel who is very smart and who will become mc's teacher in future 200+ chps, that does give it right to add genius, smart tags.

This story is just going downhill as we go further... ignoring that fact that world building is crap with lots of inconsistency and loop hole, mc is dump with no braincells and just thinks with his d*ck... Author just made it worst in latest chps like mc was already very weak when he couldn't even beat random mobs with system even after having elemental advantage and being larger in numbers with his hoe team. and action and spells are the worst I have ever seen in a novel. Well, I was going with it because I thought it can't go worst but then author decided to price a mana regen - one time use pill with 50k LPs like seriously? how much are you trying to nnerf n already pathetic and weak mc? his foundations are weak if tho he wasted over 6 months in total 'strengthening' those foundations...and I have read another review which was on point with criticism (3 stars) and guess what...now its got deleted like my review is going to be in a few days. no point ranting when author doesn't give a f and this platform doesn't do anything about it too.

As a man of culture, seeing venti in dp and harem tag as I cultivate my dao, I was 25+ chps into the novel but then I stumbled upon the comment section...and what do I see? FRICKING AUTHOR ADDED HAREM TAG FOR SIDE CHARACTERS!!!! YES RANDOM MOBS! WHAT A JOKE AND TIME WASTE...MY FOUNDATION OF CULTIVATION TILL NOW HAS BEEN RUINED. NOW HOW WILL I SOAR THROUGH THE HEAVENS!!! oof

I dropped it... still the same even after 20 chapters and I can't keep with the cringe and irritation. It is meant to be entertaining not irritating.

all mc had to do was command but he was dumb enough to not get it oof.

that was just a reply prompt for his action (stabbing himself in the heart).

then the daddy will go out for the milk, for the game...

when there's a hole, there's a goal

no comments huh

ok hopefully I don't die out of cringe till that point 😂 but if it gets better I'll rewrite the review with better rating.

I am sorry author but after the addition of the Qi shan, the story became irritating to read and after investing so much time and keys into the chapter, I am meeting with this disappointment. I even waited that maybe the character is only irritating at the start but oh man even after 10 chapter, she and mc is as irritating as ever. And because of Qi shan, Mc's interactions with other characters like house spirit or his teacher is also getting irritating and cringy, sorry but I don't it was a nice idea to add Qi shan here.