Dale_Eaton
Lv11
2022-05-12 JoinedGlobal
79.3h
of reading
3
Read books
Badges
5Moments
8
Dale_Eaton1yrCommentedspwll checking needs work
Russell came to a sudden realization and said, "I was wondering why these two young ones have come to Houston two days in advance. He even specifically said that he wants to invite me and you two to a meal."- Dale_Eaton1yrCommented
spell checking needs work
A soft voice soon came from inside, "Tell my mother that I won't see him." - Dale_Eaton1yrCommented
"get out of the car!" it should say second spelling mistake in less than a sentence, if you're going to charge this kind of money for reading material you should do better spell checking
Jordan repeated seriously, "I said, get off the car!" - Dale_Eaton1yrCommented
"get out!" Is what it should have said if you can charge just kind of money for a book you should have better spell checking
Jordan said to Sylvie coldly, "Get off." - Dale_Eaton1yrCommented
my boyfriend is coming home soon and I want to cook for "her"?!?
"If there's nothing else, I want to go back now. My boyfriend is getting off work soon. I have to go back to cook for her." - Dale_Eaton2yrCommentedCh 81 Going Back to the Camdens' Place Again!
- Dale_Eaton2yrCommented
spelling, doesn't anybody proofread these?
In a Starbucks branch of a certain shopping mall in the city center of Orlando. - Dale_Eaton2yrCommented
the first word Orlando is supposed to be Jordan your proofreaders and spell checkers should do a better job it's only chapter 11 or 12
Drew walked towards Orlando again. "Haha, good-for-nothing, you will no longer have a foothold in Orlando from now on. Pack up and get lost from Orlando, haha!"