Grammar? Yeah, I ain't perfect and I make mistakes. But is a couple of grammar issues and flow issues worthy of a 2/5? That's incredibly harsh. Story Development? Eh, if you don't like OP protagonists and instead want a wimpy twerp who can't do anything, just say so. Jokes aside, I get where you're coming from but it's entirely subjective. I like it when MCs get strong quick and you obviously don't, so there's no need to argue over this point. Character Design? I based all the conversations off of the original webtoon, so maybe you should go have a chat with that author, not me. Besides, I think you're confused. The protagonist IS Kim Soohyun. He didn't just take over his body. He gained his memories, his emotions, his connections to his family and friends. The reason he's not upset over dying is because he's partly Kim Soohyun, the dude who literally just came back to life after being strangled out by his bully. Also, even if he had taken over Kim Soohyun's body...why would he feel sorrow or guilt? The Kim Soohyun in this story died. That's how the MC's memories and soul entered the body and merged with the original. Why would he feel guilt or sorrow for entering an empty body? But you know the one thing I absolutely can't agree with? That the Update Stability is bad. I've been putting out a chapter a day, bro. Not to mention that each chapter is above 3k words and usually around 4k or 5k words. That's much better than the 1k words you did at the start of your current book, mate. If I did 1-2k words per chapter, I'd have between 19 and 37 chapters out by now. So nearly half of the chapters you've got out in four months time if we went with 1k word chapters. But okay bro. Nice review. A bit weird how personal you're taking my fanfic (are you the original author of Quest Supremacy or something?) but I guess you're just a pretty die hard fan of the original, so it's cool. Thanks for taking your time to write it! :)

And yet they think they are. A sad situation, honestly.

I don't exactly have anything else to change it to.

Eh, I don't know. I'll think about it and read IRL Quest before I make a decision on it.

That's just semantics, really. It'd mean the same thing either way lol.

You can still look at paragraph comments on you phone, but I'll put it here anyway.

There's one in the paragraph comments.

If you're talking about Kang Seok and Han Jae-Ha, they're bosses to South Gangbuk High and East Gangbuk High, respectively.

He's talking about his school though. Not the entirety of Korea lol. Don't see the point of commenting this.

It's not selective though? It heals wounds. That's what a healing factor does. You don't see Wolverine or Deadpool going 'Oh boy, I sure do love my healing factor because it also cuts down on recovery time from the gym!' - you see them go 'Man, I'm glad my healing factor allows me to heal from wounds much quicker than ordinary.' If you want an over the top OP MC, just say so, my guy.

Pretty much, yeah.

Kim Soohyun is the MC of Quest Supremacy.

I'm not completely opposed to adding some webtoons with supernatural aspects, as long as the supernatural aspects aren't basically just superpowers. That'd make a lot of what the MC is doing now, completely pointless.

He didn't quit school in the original. He just took time off. Same thing here - Hajoon is just taking some time off to heal after the damage caused to him by the MC.

Thank you. Your compliments mean a lot to me as a writer! I've tried my best to make a compelling MC who's somewhat multi-faceted and isn't just a cardboard cutout like some fanfic MCs are. So I'm glad I'm doing a decent job at it lol.

If it's recommended like that, I'll give it a go when I have the time. Thanks for the manhwa suggestion!

I don't understand your question, if I'm being completely honest.

No. It's a roundhouse kick. He was feinting a front kick but switched at the last second.