JondYnn
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JondYnn30dReplied to Emruyour mind is just dirty
“Be a good boy... Daddy is here… Be an obedient boy, and come here…”- JondYnn30dReplied to Aurel_Infinity
are you acoustic
"Bro, another one with a death wish" Hunter B - JondYnn1mthCommented"Hahaha! Hahaha!" Rey laughed in amusement.
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wasn't he supposed to have no friends?? where did best friend come from
'I bet Bill still sees her as a goddess. He's been crushing on her since middle school,' Rey mused, spotting his best friend, Billy McGuire, still fawning over Alicia. Some things, it seemed, never changed, and Rey couldn't help but smile at the familiar sight. - JondYnn1mthCommentedVermont, Academy of Dark Arts.
- JondYnn1mthCommented…You are quite humorous, aren't you…? The corners of Klein's mouth twitched as he resisted the urge to draw his gun.
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Writing the review after reading 1000 chapters. TRANSLATION: The translation is not bad. There are quite a few mistakes here and there that will prevent you from being totally immersed but it is not something that will ruin your overall experience. The main problem is the conveying of emotions and gestures. The writer has the habit of explaining evey single thing the characters encounter. One single action may take upto several chapters just to be explained. There are many chapters where the writer is just yapping about with no direction where the story is going. STORY DEVELOPMENT: The book is just a repetition of the same storyline with different characters. The same thing happens to the MC every time, being underestimated and scorned and at the end he ultimately ends up on top. In the last 1000 chapters there is no story development and many questions are still unanswered. The main premise of the story is a term that I discovered here "face-slapping". The MC's action has no consequences as he steps on everyone he meets. He is also surrounded by many cultivators leagues above him but there is not a single time he is defeated. Admittedly he can be said to possess an OP power but it is mentioned he cannot defeat those many leagues above him and he still manages to come out on top. I continued on the premise that it will get better but it is still the same. There is no development on the MC's constitution. Why was he poisoned? Who poisoned him?. But everything is not as bland as it seems. If you enjoy reading novels with no huddles for the MC and no stepping zones for him to overcome this novel is for you. CHARACTER DESIGN: The main character is somewhat written above average. His actions are entertaining, likeable making you root for him. The problem comes to the other characters, they are what is called NPC's. All of them do not have any thinking abilities whatsoever. The MC solves every single problem and they don't bring any contribution to the table. The MC does everything and they get to enjoy the advantages. UPDATING STABILITY: I started reading after the novel after it was finished so I do not have any qualms about its update. WORLD BACKGROUND; The Master teacher continent is said to be massive but not as massive I think it is portrayed as. How massive does it have to be where an alliance as big as The Myriad Alliance is just a drop of water in the sea. It is just like the Storyline. It is very convenient that everytime there is a bigger fish. The MC cultivates to a higher realm he finds himself in place where he is a small fry he cultivates higher and the same thing happens with no development.
- JondYnn1mthCommentedDunn curved the corners of his mouth up and said, "Don't worry. Actually, Daly seldom does this. She just wants to use these methods to calm you down. She prefers corpses over men."
- JondYnn1mthCommentedHer emerald eyes smiled at Klein as she said, "I need a bit of help here. After all, you are not an enemy, I can't treat you harshly. That might make you uncomfortable or put you in pain. It might even leave some serious after-effects on you. I will give you some fragrances, making you feel tender and smooth, which will allow you to let loose bit by bit so that you can truly indulge in those feelings."
- JondYnn1mthCommentedDunn did not stop him. Instead, he gave him a keen look and said, "No problem, Klein. Believe me, I am far more powerful than you can imagine in the dark night."
- JondYnn1mthCommentedAlger Wilson stood on deck, his body undulating with the currents at sea, maintaining his balance easily.
- JondYnn1mthReplied to Ssafff
ii think it's muzzler
Yes, I should clean up the blood stains on my head, or I'll keep looking like a crime scene. It's fine scaring myself, but if I were to scare my sister, Melissa, when she gets up early in the morning tomorrow, it would be quite problematic! - JondYnn1mthCommented
Not ominous at all..
"Everyone will die, including me." - JondYnn1mthCommented“You’re courting death!”
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wasn't it supposed to be 8 ding???
“Alright!” Seeing that Bai Xun was unwilling to spar, Zhang Xuan shook his head in disappointment. He looked at the Strength Measuring Rock Pillar, which was just inserted into a crevice on the ground and walked over to it. With a slight smile, he said, “Actually, I have tested my strength yesterday and it was about 4 ding or so. There probably won’t much of a difference testing it today…” - JondYnn1mthCommented
I can smell this is a scam from far away
“However, before I start appraising for you all, I would like to say something. An appraiser can only heighten the possibility of attaining a treasure. I cannot promise you all that you all will get a treasure with 100% probability!”