This is about Heaven? She used to be quiet?

Very dramatic and fast paced. I think a lot of people will really like it. There are issues with needing editing and places that are confusing, so be aware. However, if you love teen drama, you will probably love this book regardless!

Funny Mirror calling out Heaven for being dramatic. Aren't they both? or all, really.😆

Hard to have any sympathy for her. Drama queen indeed 😅

Mirror is so harsh. Could have said no and had all the drama at the wedding. 😅 Does Heaven just not like Hazel? That's why she is nicer to others?

empty classroom?

This chapter and the last have a good flow 😊 Good work

Did she wake up on the wrong side of the bed? 😅

We must all be from very different places in this comment section. If I was Mirror, I would've never agreed to such a thing as forced marriage. Running away would've been better than being part of a business deal. She has every right to be angry, and she should've fought against it harder.

terrible father. Poor Mirror

The plot is interesting, but sometimes, it's confusing to read and easy to get lost. with so much happening, I want more of each event to really understand the character

moving dead jerk. known a few of those 😉

I don't why the things are happening, but it's entertaining.

I'm curious about the stuff inside the [ ] I guess I usually see it to denote stuff in system novels or like written notes.

I need to hear someone scream like a baleen whale now. Life goal

Is the 1st person pov to 3rd person switch permanent? Curious to see how Heavrn recovers and deals with classmates without remembering things

Poor Heaven :(

This chapter has a lot of potential. It's a good concept, but some editing could really make it shine. I'll keep reading to see what happens next 🥰

What a rough way to wake up. Amnesia.