the characterization of Hector is full of inconsistencies. Incredible. These chapters on Hector are a waste of reading and coins.

the character of Hector is without any logical foundation. incredible. how could the author treat us like fools.

The character of Connor is unusually tolerant while that of his protagonists are incredibly abusive. how could a secret trillonaire tolerate such insults.

At least 3 differeng novels have the same chapter story/plot.

The plot started so abrupt. it didn't lay the foundation reasonably. But I like the presentation of the chapters anyway.