Bai_JieJie250
[Beginner Writer] I like making Novels while making readers mad and make a one-sided relationship I'm pretty young so my Writing is not too good Btw I'm not really Chinese just like the culture :3
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I imagined the beautiful lady, with long black hair, and porcelain skin from afar but when you see her closer her skin is rotting and peeling off under her dress, and a corpse like smell is attached to her. The thin fingers she hid under her sleeves are actually claws that are stained in crimson dried red. When she opens her mouth it'll agape like some sort of viper with teeth attached everywhere inside her mouth, and sunken eyes.
but it's unlikely haha, if it was, he would've been called Demonic sword master
maybe the Heavenly Sword Immortal was a sadist, and wanted to trick people into losing their life's by using it, I've seen a bit of the trope in novels where the Ancient Master, Sword God, etc makes a trap, trick in their manuals surpricing the MC bc it was for fun, sadist,etc tho it's rare n I don't remember them anymore
I just what to hear another description of TLX honestly
oh, I'm not a native speaker too actually. I think I'm pretty okay in English but I hate using a repeated sentence too many times
she's a adult yet she keeps going to the ML even if Instructor mri lan kept saying not to, and warning her, her IQ feels like a teen
I will literally explore if I hear 'TLX's/Perfect copy's slender body' one more time, there ar others Descriptions like 'TLX's perfect copy smiled excitedly, as she Streches her Flexible figure,' like anything but slender please???
absolutely agree tbh I feel like author is probably self inserting herself, while also adding things she wish she could be onto TLX honestly I only read it for the unique plot with system n stuff but to me TLX's personality is 1/5 stars since I hate her Bratty, and Stupid personality plus she keeps going to the ML whose name I already forgot by now even after Mei Lan instructed her a million time not to interact with him, she literally has a mind of a teenage girl even if she died as an adult in her past life if I remember, ik she's aleyas sick and alone but she probably already learned something by now form the internet right??
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I swear if there's suddenly a drama with ml or sm that prevents her evolve Im going to Los it
No offence, but why is it whenever in the novel each time there's a text that describes tlx figure there ALWAYS has to be 'TLX Slender Figure..' like ??? I already know she's beautiful, I don't need to keep being reminded she's slender too