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Stray99th4mthReplied to Yachii_Yes, you don't think the comment section are for both positive and negative interactions, npc. I can see that, clearly.
Although things had taken a different turn from what he had initially planned, Ryuma was fine with it. A new and better opportunity had appeared before him, and an improved plan started to formulate in his mind around this new opportunity. He thought to himself, 'Hahaha... things are going to get fun from here on.'- Stray99th4mthReplied to atamix
You forgot the "Insert generic pic/gif: I have no argument but I'm better than you", idiot.
Although things had taken a different turn from what he had initially planned, Ryuma was fine with it. A new and better opportunity had appeared before him, and an improved plan started to formulate in his mind around this new opportunity. He thought to himself, 'Hahaha... things are going to get fun from here on.' - Stray99th4mthCommented
Laid off on this for a few days. Is he going to mess with the plot? Quite the moron for someone who supposedly thinks ahead.
"Yup, I am ready… can't wait to meet them!" after such a long time. - Stray99th4mthCommented
More fun, haha. Unfortunately, I won't get to see it./sBye folks.
Although things had taken a different turn from what he had initially planned, Ryuma was fine with it. A new and better opportunity had appeared before him, and an improved plan started to formulate in his mind around this new opportunity. He thought to himself, 'Hahaha... things are going to get fun from here on.' - Stray99th4mthCommented
Can't unsee this kid's weak will, now. The past chapters, he has worried about everything, with none of the demeanor he's had before. Disappointing.
However, a lingering concern surfaced for Ryuma, "But will the others in the Revolutionary Army accept me as one of their own once they discover I was the cause of the trouble they endured? I'm indirectly responsible for their deaths—how can they be okay working with me?" Ryuma, aware of the potential consequences, didn't harbor naive expectations of easy acceptance. - Stray99th4mthCommented
Literally pressured into a decision, lol.
After careful consideration, Ryuma finally spoke, "Maybe joining the Revolutionary Army isn't such a bad idea after all." - Stray99th4mthCommented
Kid wouldn't have joined the revolutionary army, lol.
He is self-aware enough to acknowledge that he wasn't Monkey D. Luffy, and consequently, lacked the plot armor and luck that often-ensured Luffy's safety in perilous situations. This recognition made him acutely aware of the need for extreme caution. He didn't want to find himself in a situation akin to the unfortunate fate of Useless 'Captain' Mid… uh… no, it was Eustass 'Captain' Kid, right? - Stray99th4mthReplied to Lakerus43
Yes, lol. Once a revolutionary, always a revolutionary.
"Great," Betty exclaimed. "So, until you reach the age of seventeen, the time when you want to set sail, I want you to work for the Revolutionary Army. It's just four years, not too long, right? This should be acceptable," she added, expressing hope that Ryuma would agree to her proposal. - Stray99th5mthCommented
Take your time.
I know the story is moving forward at a snail's pace, however, I want to cover a lot of things, especially a bond between Ryuma and Kuina, along with many other things before this Arc comes to an end, so I apologize, but please bear with it. - Stray99th5mthCommented
I can get by this. Anyway, I hope if they ever go to Skypeia, that he doesn't steal Luffy's plot with Enel and such.
I am not certain whether the White Sea exists everywhere in the World (in small patches), or it is exclusive to the Grand Line and the New World, I don't remember it being stated in the Manga, anyway, let it exist above the Blue Sea as well in this fanfic. - Stray99th5mthPosted
- Stray99th5mthReplied to Nachtregen
How about not relying on a system or another anime's power for starters? You're already writing a fanfic, the least you can do is make a character that blends with the story, idiot.
This book has been deleted. - Stray99th5mthPosted
- Stray99th5mthCommentedCh 23 Chapter – 23 News Of Shanks Return, Impact of the Loss of Arm, & The Hundredth Challenge
- Stray99th5mthCommentedCh 24 Chapter – 24 The Hundredth Duel
- Stray99th5mthPosted
"Don't be happy about the characters, none of them are actually from One piece, they just have the same name, because chaos, blah blah blah""Same goes for the devil fruits. I wIlL rEvIsE tHeM mYsElF" There's a reason Oda is a successful mangaka and you're a fanfic writer, you retarded sack of shit. Ask someone to chop your hands off and never write again.
- Stray99th5mthReplied to Mr_NightCh 16 Chapter – 16 Setting Out to Sea
- Stray99th5mthReplied to Coldman
Relying on a ROB as a plot device is already cringe, so the premise itself is lame.
The Young man grinned, and spoke, "So, first of all, I want to have a mix of Oni & merfolk bloodline… for the Oni part, I do not want it to be the giant ones, like Oars, but the smaller ones like Kaidou and Yamato, and for the merfolk part, I only want their ability to breathe underwater, not the tail." And added after a pause, "After that comes to the Devil Fruit, for this, I want to have the Moa Moa no Mi that was eaten by Byrnndi World, also do me a favor and please make me immune to Sea Water, Being in a world majority of which is the ocean, and being unable to swim can put me in a bit of a pickle… Also, I would like to have the knowledge of all three forms of Haki, as well as Swordsmanship as well as their training methods, and please do incorporate the potential of a King because Conqueror is the most important." - Stray99th5mthPosted
Nothing about this is realistic or Onepiece. This is the author being a horny permavirgin making poorly written smut with characters that for some reason has the same name as OP characters. Nothing about this author's "Makino" is Makino, etc. Chop this idiot's hands off and never let them write again.