It says about Lucifer. Please fix it

So far, everything has been fixed for the better. It's nice to see how the author makes this fanfiction the best version of himself .................................................................................................................................................................................................

the problem is that most people read webnovel through a browser, not an application.

Fan fiction with great potential, I hope for further development. (By the way, I don't have paragraphs between sentences from chapter 4 to chapter 13)

very informative

Bro, I can't come up with any profound words from myself since I'm a student. However, my father once told me that if a woman falls in love with you during the worst of times, you shouldn't let her go. Instead, you should marry her and strive to become the best version of yourself, both for your sake and hers. Your fanfiction, in turn, helps me relax during my free time from studying. I sincerely appreciate your dedication and hard work. Thank you.

This is a quote from the movie "Camp goes to the sky."

Yes

Yes

Harem

Shouldn't he at least be a true vampire?

The greatest systemic novel I have ever read. I highly recommend you read this. ..................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

Not my cup of tea. But for fans of this format is suitable.....…...………....….......….......….......….......….......….......….......….......….......….......….......….......….......….......…...

This novel has potential. Let's see what it will be like in the future. ...........,.....,.....,.,..............,..............,.................,....................,......................,........................,..................,..................,.............

Get well

evolution and learning

Man, you screwed up and ruined the arch with my favorite BNHA series, and also added a fucking harem. You're a psycho and a pervert. (Actually, I like what you write, it's just that I'm under the gun of your hater)

Quite an interesting idea of the plot and narration. There are problems with grammar, but it's not for me to judge (English is my 4th language). I would like to see Poseidon in Douluo Dalu and see how he will interact with Poseidon from this universe.

Yasaka

Wolf