This story is amazing. Funny, interesting, light-hearted and witty. You won’t be a single trashy trope (in fact this story is so spontaneous and random, it’s too funny). 5/5 story

Author is it harem?

The book is amazing. Hands down of the best concepts there is. It’s written well and flows very smoothly. It’s also really interesting, fun, and engaging to the reader. My only concern is the MC. He comes the poorest and trashiest of places but he remains a naive kid. I understand it’s for the sake of character development but it’s been 250+ chapters and he has this idealistic vision that I find extremely annoying. Also he’s very inconsistent with how he views the world. The other characters are written amazingly and are super awesome. I wish the MC was Wyntor and not this child that goes through a mental crisis after every incident. Overall, still one of the best I’ve read.

Is it harem?

Author, how many ppl in the harem? I don’t wanna start if he starts going Pokémon collecting.

Sorry dropping rn. It had great potential but now it’s just flowing randomly. Power scaling is so autistic, idk who’s strong and who’s not. The MC is just meh and plain. Half of his actions are dumb and a waste of time. The writing is done very well though, so I’m kinda sad to be dropping this. Overall, this was not bad.

Author doesn’t even seem like he is trying to hide the idiocy of the MC anymore.

I’m ranting a lot but this novel is really great. I’m just worried for what the future MC holds for us.

Very apt description.

This is actually fantastic. It’s funny and creative. MC is the best type we could ask for. It’s awesome. Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

Thanks for the response. Great story too.

Question: Why would MC show off his advanced magic skills if he wanted to stay off the radar? It seems completely pointless. Unless there’s a specific reason, which seems highly unlikely, it was stupid from the beginning. He could’ve showed Mcgonagall some 2nd year transfiguration or something, why would he show something so advanced? Anyways I’m rambling because I’m a bit annoyed. Overall, it seems like a good read so far.

It was unexpected for me to find such a good story. The Naruto world was absolute fantastic, the world building was amazing and the humour was peak. I kinda wished we had more sweet interactions between MC and Konan. But overall great!!

This is the first comment for my first work. I could not be happier with this comment. Appreciate it!!

One question: Is the MC autistic? I’m seriously questioning whether the MC has a problem. I understand that the MC acts this way to highlight his curiosity and amazement at this new world, but he seems like he is seriously lacking socially. I’m asking because it’s hard to find a normal 30 year old (mentally) that names their diary, along with many other cues.

I have one question for the author. Why does the MC continue to show off so much strength despite his circumstances. Firstly, he’s only a 2-star talent so he should have a much slower growth rate. Does it not make sense that no one has questioned his significant behavioural change, eye colour change and super strength that happened all of a sudden? Another thing is why does he not wear contact lenses or at least glasses? Purple eyes being distinctive characteristics of void-walkers should be enough for him to make cautious decisions. It’s so easy to wear some lenses but this guy has still not done so. Is there something preventing him from doing it? Not only that, doesn’t him abrupt killing intent not surprise people at all. Like he uses his aura and intent to suppress monsters and people, is that not the least bit suspicious for a complete beginner? Also, doesn’t his 4d (ability) make him much more rational? Wouldn’t that mean he would take better precautions and make safer decisions. One comment asked about whether he even needs to join an academy in the first place. All he has to do is spam dungeons and void walks. I agree with this and am wondering why he needs to join in the first place. All in all, I think this is a good story but the MCs characters seems to there just for the convenience of the plot. I just wish he could be more low-key, especially when he’s literally one of the most wanted people in the universe.