The main character embarks on a journey of self-discovery with surprising results. Despite a few flaws, it’s a pleasure to accompany The Narrator on this physical and emotional journey. The unexpected twists and turns is a fitting denouement to an epic and memorable read.

Wow...she is some kind of special. Delusional. Bipolar. Maybe schizophrenic Tendencies too... Shut up and go take your meds, hun.

It's amusing in a gamer way. A bit wordy at the beginning but a lot of manga seems that way at 1st. The art is pleasant as well you can tell the effort that was put into the art. So far I'm enjoying it. ☺

Last paragraph Jeff and Mia... unless Harry can teleport from Jade 😆 jk

Jeff turned to Sonia...

I changed my username back to it's original try JadeXolic1213#5220

that's strange...

i think you misunderstood me that's ok. not many people understand me... i nv said she needed more exp. by the way. also it was a general statement not relevent to the book anymore but to all the women out there hense the abbr. names

I thought I was reading a book about 2 adults. I have to say my 1st thought was how childish they both are. My second thought was this is a stereo type for a recent deflowered girl with a bad boy. I mean there's a reason why I hear all the time that virgins are too much work. Third my thoughts trailed to similar things in previous comments. It's in the past you have 2 options take the man for who he is, that means all of him by the way(good and bad), or if you just can't move on past the hurt you leave. Honestly I disagree with the wolf and Talia. I never liked that word deserves. Do any of us really have any right to judge someone like that?? I don't care how much of a saint you are. We are all guilty of something. Anger isn't caused by other people it stems from ones inability to accept whatever caused us to become unstable. In this case T is insecure and there for seeing that video made her angry. If she was more confident something like that video would have less effect and she might playfully use it to tease D but it would have "rolled of her back" as they say.

Candy shook her head????maybe

😍 Even if just to have a chat with you. If you can write a story like this, I've concluded that you are an exceptionally rare individual. I would be ecstatic to hear from your delightful self, if you have a few spare moments for this fan.☺

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I think I like Harry 😆. I like straightforward, brutally-honest people. He did nothing wrong he just told it like it is. The problem is that most people can't handle the truth 😆. Loving the story Miss_Behavior. Thank you. Wish I could be your editor😍

This is an extremely entertaining read!!! Minus a few editting errors, I would have given it a 5 star. I can't wait for more!!! Each character brings the story alive with more vibrancy.

I had to triple check that this was the next chapter 😆 lol

visualize the black cat as a black wolf (Damon) and the white cat as kitten ( Talia) ☺

ya ....no it's never that easy...i don't think they are on the same page just yet.

This will backfire... Talia's brain already comes up with excuses all on it's own. now she will tell herself it is only pretend.🤦 Damon you think your being smart but a lie is a lie is a lie no matter which way you spin it. I look forward to seeing him untangle this web.